Man every time I read this chapter someone always has to be chopping onions…

Love me some communication !!!

Omg I don’t get why you don’t have more comments !!!

3rd time reading and still I love the start of this story!!

Good chapter… not loving the slurs tho. Let’s keep fa**ot out of the vocab please

Heads up that you mentioned Taylor before introducing them… there’s some important info missing. Made reading this chap a little confusing

Been really enjoying the story so far but this chapter is almost unreadable. The paragraph long sentences and random train of thoughts are making this chap seem completely unneeded. Any new information is buried under what has been said before or under what we already knew. A bit of editing and you’d be good to go, thanks for all the hard work you’ve put in so far

That was a big wall of text… maybe break that up next time

Awww how cute! The morning scene should be interesting between these two

So far kinda stiff and formal writing… but I’m interested to see where it goes from here

Just heads up that you described him wearing glasses then made grandma go get them and described them again

I’m glad amari was able to do and say everything he needed. Im glad he can leave those memories behind and live a happy life with those he loves. You’ve done a fabulous job!

I appreciate how amari doesn’t try to hide the bad from taitai. He explains in a very compassionate way every time as to why something has happened . Can’t wait for the next chapter !

I’m glad on the sir face the meeting went well, I hope in future there isn’t too much hurt. Thanks for the chapter!

I’m so excited for this arc! I hope amari doesent get too disappointed by his visit

Though I’m sad it’s done Im happy there was a happy ending! It’s proof that no matter what you’ve gone through, happiness can still be found. It just might take some a little longer😊

Love it!!! I really like listening To the music they play at the same time, really makes everything fit , thanks again for the chapter

10/10 adorable! Cany wait to see what’s next… I’m gonna have to reread This in the meantime

Ah I missed this lovely pair! Thanks so much for your hard work!

Not really a fan of the beginning of the chapter … otherwise good story