Madaradagod

This story is a lot better than your soccer one

Welp this chapter confirms the ai copy paste man this entire app has become infected with it and nothing against ai I use it as well but what happened to the writers on this app man. I remember when people got angry when Webnovel started putting straight up MTL of certain Chinese stories but now look around even the fanfiction which is ai. Still a decent slop to consume starts of well.

Prequel hate will not be tolerated but I will admit I felt they would’ve been better as a a longer form show

Well done from start to finish very few got stories get finished and those that do get dragged out for hundreds of chapters. Even if this had used AI or gramarly it was barely noticeable. You had an idea you started it and ended great job.

This novel could be great but it’s held back by certain elements I enjoyed some of the retellings so I have nothing against that and reactions but this is something a lot of these entertainment fics do. We have had 270 chapters but the mc has not evolved we know the story of how well he sells out and how people react to the stories but the romance hasn’t moved, mc has become more of a robot, he feels like more of a tool to retell great stories and we read reactions. This had a great start and I thought after hikaru no go we’d see more growth but author seems stuck in a loop. I’ll keep an eye on this but man how disappointing

Plastic is this generations lead and asbestos

He said the thing

Ai slop with some polish not a bad read if you enjoy that kind of thing

Look man it’s not about length it’s about content. Your story has reached past the point of redoing the movies. Imo you should focus more on the characters stories and the business empire he’s building. But at the end of the day it’s your story and your vision I’ll still be here for the ride but as a long time reader I felt the need to share my opinion.

Ima be honest this just Pateron bait at this point we do not need 3 chapters retelling a movie just choice one or two scenes you want change or you think are significant and get back to the plot