Fatedouluo666

Please don't tell me your choosing your old enemies and th*t over another valyrian house and some potentially loyal subjects, glad to see your not repeating your ancestors mistakes😭

Yeah has no threatening past against you or your family, of valyrian heritage definitely waifu material😉, unlike Arianne the spoiled girl who shares her bed with whoever, wouldn't touch her with a ten foot pole

Revealing your intentions to illyrio is a very risky move depending on if he thinks your just stupid or mad and will end up killing yourself, but revealing this in front of oberyn who has already seen you are capable of actual magic and your teaching him this magic(Stupid) when your whole strategy of not being controlled and used by him and his family is having dragons to counter them not that it helped his ancestors next level of stupidity🤣

Yeah teaching magic to the martells, the descendants of the rhoynar, the family that murdered and possibly tortured your ancestor, who you have a very shaky untrustworthy alliance with at the moment, no way that could backfire glad to see the mcs not repeating the same mistakes his ancestors made, being arragont, overconfident and stupid😭

I hate when the mc come into the planetos with powerful wishes but then immediately starts to ingratiate himself with others, he's a dragonlord possesses lost knowledge of forging and Magic and has a talent for weaponry why exactly does he need to grovel to the so called nobles of the seven kingdoms who hate magic on principal and as part of their religion and will only spy on him, steal from him and then definitely betray him

I thought I judged it to hastily and he would go through a big change around chapter 30 so I got the full patreon membership and yet all he does is start acting unbelievably arrogant and disgusting like daemon or aegon, acting completely self important, going from aparantely cowardly and afraid about the dance to completely arrogant and disgusting and yet still playing the game of thrones and still practically no information about his system, frankly it was a complete waste of money

I would have nothing to do with any of them viserys is a weak king who had maybe one admirable moment in the series, daemon is unbalanced and there's no low he wouldn't stoop to and rhaenyra has no idea about or talent for governing and corlys is just unnecessarily ambitious and his family do whatever he thinks is best just for there house

Yeah mcs a moron hasn't explored his system at all or it hasn't been explained yet, had maybe 2 potentially real family members who cared for him, let one die alone so he could curry favour with his as*hole of a father and because he was to cowardly to stand up to him and the other he usurped her position as heir of runestone and was happily sold of to lady jeyne who has no interest in men so his uncle and father can get better positions, I thought he might have grown a backbone by choosing his mother and staying at runestone to actually improve his territory but here he is being a tool again,complete disappointment of a character let alone a mc like most characters in game of thrones

Don't bother, I've read ahead on patreon and he spends the entire time getting humiliated, smiling about it, being taking fo a fool and sucking up to everyone using and humiliating him, it has no inkling of him growing a backbone and refusing people who are humiliating him and then basically forcing him into a betrothal so they control him.This fanfic had a little bit of potential but went downhill pretty soon after it started and now it's just embarrassing to read the mcs actions

Who would actually stop him with all the plotting I don't think anyone would actually have the actual courage to risk a fight with him