sliverbard12

this has such bad grammar and mixes up name's and people. you can barely tell who the heck is talking or if they're talking at all 1 star

not really since he's not attacking directly. it's more of a counter than anything. the damage is just a side affect

continue writing please. It's one of the best Naruto fanfics I have read

continue writing please

number 2 &4

fast draw sword technique

The main problem is the Latex looking BAT SUITE NOThim beating people up

yes but it's not from the blind man's prospective at this point. the author just changed it to the third person P.O.V

just try your best. that's all we can do. as repetitive as it may sound one step at a time.

your whole fanfic staring from five chapter's ago have sharple declined in both writing compression, grammar and spelling. please for the Love of God fix it. I do not want another one of my favorite fanfics to be ruined again