first bath them

when will the plot progress?

where is the template

so the mc didn't know chairman wasn't human? what a huge plot hole.

same dialogs. Atleast change the dialogs

Well I also don't care. And I reached the conclusion that, Its better to quit.

Well you are fundamentally wrong. The thing is Why is he doing useless things. For the last 10 chapters I don't see progress. Why bother? what is the author planning to do? The character contradicts himself. And is there any reward or something to forcefully promoting the plot. I think the author hit the wall.

Senseless one, aren't you?

Even now you don't know?

this is a messed up story

No, he tank bettter than normal persons and normal metas. He has better defence against magic than normal humans and average metahumans. This was proved when battled against shazam. More wins gone to superman. And superman manhandled king shazam when he stopped holding back along with supergirl. His durability against magic is shown again when he fought against Apex LUTHOR. Most of the justice league were defeated when fought with apex luthor. And superman tanked seven energies one being magic. That's why I said don't bring your so little knowledge here. He can tank magic better than normal metas.

No. what you are writing is one dimensional characters and the mention of a name of some character that can't bring your story to life. I feel that even the characters you mention I don't feel any similarity to it. And the plot is unrelated. If this is a fan fic then all the books in the world are fan fic.

Well I said please stop your writing with little knowledge. Superman isn't weak to magic. He isn't invulnerable to it. He even has greater durability than normal metas against magic. So I said please don't bring ypur poor knowledge in this.

PLEASE STOP IT IS NOT HIS WEAKNESS. HE IS NT JUST INVULNERABLE TO IT.

if the plot is too different and unrelated then it is not fan fic.

because i find it in fan fic section and i only realize it when i read a few chapters. Also i stopped reading your novel after this. so please dont put it in fan fic section. its a pain in the ***

then dont write this as fan fiction. write as your orginal as orginal characters have no importance to you.

the information is wrong. indra is only god king like thor or odin and sizerechs is a superdevil . the info is just wrong.

loki is not bullet proof. he was hurt from floor when hulk hit to floor

what is this? where is the mortal that shook the greece? half a chapter and an inchorent one.