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This guy really loves purges.
Ah... I'm doing fine fellow hotman! The wife has just given birth to beautiful baby girl and they're both doing well. As for the rascal... I sent him away to the boiling rock to serve our great nation and to see where he may end up if continues fooling around!
The Fire Nation military is strict and regulated. we see this when Zuko got in trouble for speaking out of turn even though he was a prince. Ozai certainly took advantage of the situation but even Iroh himself admitted that Zuko's words were rigth but his decision to speak out was wrong. I don't see a general of iroh's standing place his son in a position he wasn't fully suitable for. Even though he is royalty, he's still young and inexperienced to command a force into dangerous and unknown territories.
Yep! The Fire Nation was on its way to siege ba sing se- the fearsome Komodo-rhinos are a must.
this story has some pros and cons. The pros are it has good writing quality, especially for a webnovel fic being written by a non-native. you wont lose brain cells reading. now onto the cons. the fanfic is highly unrealistic with a child doing and having influence they shouldn't and no one finds this strange. if you are like me, you would have been attracted to the mc being a chemist, but the MC barely uses his chemistry knowledge at all. with what little that is used is not hyped up enough. and finally, the last con is the god awful filler! the filler itself isnt the issue entirely, the author is unable to organically introduce the original worldbuilding into the story. instead it is more like a wiki of character and world descriptions. there is little character or realism injected into the story. so all in all, if you like a story with good worldbuilding that follows the timeline of asoiaf along with realism, then dont expect too much when reading. this story has a great concept with good grammar but subpar execution.
Damn! I couldn't have said that better. it's frustrating how nowadays hedonism is always being justified and logic is being stomped out because it doesn't sound good.