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Wangfire

Wangfire

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Just an aspiring author..........

2019-01-12 JoinedJamaica
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  • Wangfire
    Wangfire4d
    Replied to Apathy_Personified

    you're welcome

    Ch 21 Drifting Wood
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    A Song of Fire and Steel (Avatar the Last Airbender / GOT fanfic)
    Anime & Comics · Wangfire
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  • Wangfire
    Wangfire5d
    Commented

    This guy really loves purges.

    'Slaughter the entire Higher-ups and change the way things were done, restructure the whole system from the top to the bottom.'
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    Cursed Eyes (Itachi in JJk)
    Anime & Comics · FreddySZN
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  • Wangfire
    Wangfire1mth
    Replied to UthredofBebbanburg

    Ah... I'm doing fine fellow hotman! The wife has just given birth to beautiful baby girl and they're both doing well. As for the rascal... I sent him away to the boiling rock to serve our great nation and to see where he may end up if continues fooling around!

    "Commander, I want you to prepare the necessary equipment and logistics to field a force of 2600 soldiers at maximum. A quarter of which will be Firebending infantry, another will be Firebending cavalry, the other 650 troops will be infantry Pikemen, while the final quarter will be non-bending cavalry." Iroh locked eyes with the man.
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    A Song of Fire and Steel (Avatar the Last Airbender / GOT fanfic)
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  • Wangfire
    Wangfire1mth
    Replied to greatcheesemaster

    Thanks for the review!

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    A Song of Fire and Steel (Avatar the Last Airbender / GOT fanfic)
    Anime & Comics · Wangfire
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  • Wangfire
    Wangfire1mth
    Replied to MimicReads

    I'm not currently sure...

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    A Song of Fire and Steel (Avatar the Last Airbender / GOT fanfic)
    Anime & Comics · Wangfire
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  • Wangfire
    Wangfire1mth
    Replied to UthredofBebbanburg

    The Fire Nation military is strict and regulated. we see this when Zuko got in trouble for speaking out of turn even though he was a prince. Ozai certainly took advantage of the situation but even Iroh himself admitted that Zuko's words were rigth but his decision to speak out was wrong. I don't see a general of iroh's standing place his son in a position he wasn't fully suitable for. Even though he is royalty, he's still young and inexperienced to command a force into dangerous and unknown territories.

    As he marched to the armoury he couldn't help but wipe the sweat from his palms. This was to be his first engagement on the field. At first he believed it would be at the walls of Ba Sing Se, but it seemed the spirits had other plans for him.
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    A Song of Fire and Steel (Avatar the Last Airbender / GOT fanfic)
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  • Wangfire
    Wangfire1mth
    Replied to UthredofBebbanburg

    Yep! The Fire Nation was on its way to siege ba sing se- the fearsome Komodo-rhinos are a must.

    "Commander, I want you to prepare the necessary equipment and logistics to field a force of 2600 soldiers at maximum. A quarter of which will be Firebending infantry, another will be Firebending cavalry, the other 650 troops will be infantry Pikemen, while the final quarter will be non-bending cavalry." Iroh locked eyes with the man.
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    A Song of Fire and Steel (Avatar the Last Airbender / GOT fanfic)
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  • Wangfire
    Wangfire1mth
    Replied to Trickery

    Thanks for the review!

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    A Song of Fire and Steel (Avatar the Last Airbender / GOT fanfic)
    Anime & Comics · Wangfire
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  • Wangfire
    Wangfire2mth
    Posted

    this story has some pros and cons. The pros are it has good writing quality, especially for a webnovel fic being written by a non-native. you wont lose brain cells reading. now onto the cons. the fanfic is highly unrealistic with a child doing and having influence they shouldn't and no one finds this strange. if you are like me, you would have been attracted to the mc being a chemist, but the MC barely uses his chemistry knowledge at all. with what little that is used is not hyped up enough. and finally, the last con is the god awful filler! the filler itself isnt the issue entirely, the author is unable to organically introduce the original worldbuilding into the story. instead it is more like a wiki of character and world descriptions. there is little character or realism injected into the story. so all in all, if you like a story with good worldbuilding that follows the timeline of asoiaf along with realism, then dont expect too much when reading. this story has a great concept with good grammar but subpar execution.

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  • Wangfire
    Wangfire2mth
    Commented
    "I will destroy you all. I. Will. Let. You. Know. PAIN!!" Strong invisible soul power undulations slowly seeped out of his body, like some kind of illusion.
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    Douluo Dalu 2: Heavenly Eyed Douluo
    Anime & Comics · FroztDouluo
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  • Wangfire
    Wangfire2mth
    Commented

    oh.........

    "Rise now" He stated
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    GOD WILLS IT (ASOIAF)
    TV · Gs9Gosohard
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  • Wangfire
    Wangfire2mth
    Commented

    there see!

    Ch 3 Blades
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    GOD WILLS IT (ASOIAF)
    TV · Gs9Gosohard
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  • Wangfire
    Wangfire2mth
    Commented

    what of the faceless men assassins? how would he and his men face those guys. not to mention all the other magic users and the other cities rallying their men and dothraki horselords?

    Ch 1 The Foundation
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    GOD WILLS IT (ASOIAF)
    TV · Gs9Gosohard
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  • Wangfire
    Wangfire3mth
    Replied to Swordbringer

    fanfic or nah, there must be some amount of reality involved here. not to mention the craziness of 'vikings' showing up in a world they shouldn't be in.

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    Knight's Journey in Westeros
    TV · Swordbringer
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  • Wangfire
    Wangfire1yr
    Posted

    I've been looking for a fanfiction like this! There aren't many chapters yet but so far things are looking good! I have'nt spotted any errors yet and it isn't an op self-insert! i hope the auther keeps writing!

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    Dissecting the Gods. (Against the gods and Naruto fanfiction)
    Anime & Comics · bytter_sirup
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  • Wangfire
    Wangfire2yr
    Replied to Frederict

    Damn! I couldn't have said that better. it's frustrating how nowadays hedonism is always being justified and logic is being stomped out because it doesn't sound good.

    "Why are you so angry, Father? A man should start a family when he's older, and a woman should marry when she comes of age. This is human logic. Your Majesty also has good intentions."
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    My Wife Is A General Who Killed Tens Of Thousands On The Battlefield
    Eastern · My Daughter is too Cute
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