Interesting concept. However it is AI generated and therefore unreadable as far as I’m concerned.

Do you have any idea how annoying this is to those of us who listen on audio instead of read? I’m withholding your stones in protest!!

He is a prince not a lord. More casual treason.

“Your grace” is only for royalty. So he basically committed casual treason right there and could be killed for it.

The little limericks at the end of each chapter are really fun. And they work. I give all my stones whenever I have time to read this fic

The idea is interesting and it has a lot of potential. Sadly the writing style makes it difficult to enjoy the story. The repeat of the same sentences in different words feels like unnecessary padding and the constant use of big words feels like the author is trying too hard to make sure we know they are intelligent. In addition, the dialogue between characters is lacking in volume and the conversations feel stunted. I think this fic is salvageable though if more effort is moved away from describing everything in as big words as possible and into focusing more on the dialogue between characters.

The only thing not to love about this fic is that you don’t post 10 chaps a day. Great job author, keep going!

I dread the moment this novel is finished

the MC is extremely unlikable. massive 👎 from me

I gave it a 1 star mostly because of disappointment. Great premise, interesting read, then turns into harem smut trash. Didn't even have a harem tag. If there was one, I wouldn't have wasted my time.

I love this story

me: ah this author is funny. looks like this will be a fun light hearted story I can enjoy *baby gets murdered* me: ....

a superhero who isn't even a good person. the negative review is because the story had good potential and I was looking forward to it. but the author decided to have an MC who just randomly robs people. it just ruined it for me

first act is to steal from innocent people so he take a girl out. yeah that's pathetic. it's not like he is starving or in a desperate situation where he needs the money for something big. he can always figure out another way or get a job or go junk diving and fixing things and selling it. or even wait until after he meets the ancient one and see if any of his new skills might be helpful. but resorting to robbing people as a first instinct just tells me this "super hero" isn't even a decent person in the first place

I haven't noticed you had another one. I'll give it a read! keep up the good work man!

also, this is looking good so far. looking forward to seeing where the story goes

do you have any idea how excited I am rn to see a story posted by someone from the UAE? AND ITS ASOIAF. We need to be friends man

I agree with OP, but also another idea (since the whole mind control thing was used a lot in other fanfiction) is to simply have someone other than Loki lead the invasion. thanos has other followers. maybe one of his daughters or one of the members of the black hand (is that what they're called? they're black something but I'm not sure)

+1

I love you. Please don't take so long between chapters? Cat bless!