DreamReader555
Making Fanfiction Books based of Anime Series and My OC character. Hope you enjoy my books and Dream On Readers!!
Writing
of reading
10
Read books
Wow... What a way to start the book with a waking up late with a ringing phone... That is more like what I do IRL most of the time.. Keep it up with later chapters with your writing styles.
So far. Not bad for the first chapter of this ****-fanfiction. Well, firstly, it needs some more depth as well as make a dialog to make like they are having a conversation to it. Secondly, make sure to have feels and expressions to the action on what's key points are going to on. That's all.