Can't really say much when it's only beginning but for sure you spent more time about MC info than about book... First you should make story i think?

I am seriously out of webnovel for a long time. This site produce some really good works, have potential but i think contracted authors doesn't have required flexibility snd works are getting worse with time. Webnovel from some really good app with potential for good works had become English Faloo with lower work potential. As for your work i will check it tomorrow.

Not everyone have to like novels like this? And what's the point of readers only liking the story? in that case every Novel would have 5 star because you turn your brain off?From what I see you are dumb like most readers going everywhere and 5 star everything even some petty works written by 10yo. Honestly don't you can't even read with understanding, i wrote that i would usually not read it but someone recommended it. So what's your point? Dying to have your 10 seconds of attention from random dude in internet? Go grow up.

Having read it untill chapter 30 i could consider as my life achievement because I lost maybe 10 or more iq in that time. Story is not bad in a sense but whole idea about system and characters relationships is totally unreasonable. Let's start from the system... How many iq I am supposed to have to even continue reading novel when MC on start get sharing an, gluttony and some other poop? Let's not talk that's its not his Martial Spirit and it's just his talent... Whole skills are unreasonable and even naming wooden sword gave me feeling of being totally treated as brain dead. We on the start have bunch of time skips and in meantime MC gets some random stuff that makes him OP when he is 4 yo. sorry but even if it would be my son I would just propably dissect him and check if he is human.Now let's move to character relationships. It's outrageous... It's not bland , it's not bad it's just plainly unreal, unlogical and stupid. Ohhhh my son is 4 years old and create his own breathing method. Ohh my son is 4 yo and is thinking about banging me. That Bibi Dong is propably more stupid than original. Whole idea of justifying his talent as genius when he is only 4yo is outrageous and that's why people usually don't write novels starting from early age and just give big time skip to 6yo.Generally just summing it up even if whole story would be perfect and it would be best novel in the world I don't recommend it. There is bunch of good novels but you can't easily get back your lost iq that is lost at least in first 30 chapters.( Don't know about later)Story could be good with this setting but whole story feels more indifferent and easy than Wish fullfilemt r18 novels where MC is literally God on the start.

Novel whatever i would say is okay and I Can even recommend it to read. Problem there is female character. Maybe it's just me but it gives off kinda forced female MC vibes. I mean I don't have anything against females but it's kinda like writing domineering CEO with MC as male adding to it gay romance. Story as a whole is okay but idea of having female MC in world like this Yuri sometimes makes me think about domineering CEO as a gay novel.

I hyped myself for reading this but sadly oIam disappointed. I like akashi from KnB and COTE series and it could be mega combination. Start is witchout any sense, full of loopholes. Akaji or whatever is this name written escaped from white room, then what about akashi? Whole idea making him start from white rum ruin whole story. Why not just reborn as akashi in COTE world with his family like he had it in KnB? More logical, open more options, MC background is not limited to white room which is just a rat hole witchout exit for character development. IQ of MC is maximum 100 which is below the average... He seems like cringe dude wanting to be cool but still end up being someone's lapdog. I had seen few COTE fan fictions and to this moment only one was somehow readable. People too much rely in them on the plot... Why you create some character and end up following the same plot. If i want to reread the story I doesn't need some cringe dude in it. Generally whole idea for the story is one of maybe the best on site but as for the work? It is total trash.

Bruuuh. He has gotten element manipulation and he still has in system water ball skill bunch of others. He literally try to research his own powers witchout any knowledge and it's totally unlogical. His powers are there only for show and nearly never used. Story have nearly the same communication between characters as original, some reactions are nearly the same even when MC knows the plot. EQ of MC is slightly lower than my shoe size( I am not big foot ). System is just some style of chest code that enable author to make nonsense from the air and it doesn't have any real significance in plot as taking it out of the hat is nearly of the same bullshit.

He means Solo Leveling. It's literally just nearly the same story with nothing adding in monologues and some slightly other powers. And whole communication between characters feels like you would read original work instead of fan fiction so it's accurate.

If you clearly see book cover illustrating some character from some story you propably expect him into the story. and that's it you can't give any reasonable argument countering this. Author using it like this is either lack of any interest into promoting his work or clear clickbait. so either of options is bad. saying that he likes picture is unreasonable.

You whole time miss the point. Using picture from anime is ok. But his picture can't even relate to the story. It's like clickbait. It's okay to use but it doesn't mean it's morally correct. And I don't see point in your problem. there is saying about not rating book looking at it's cover. But still first impression of book comes from cover. The same is from People, if someone is wearing good, matched outfit then he is leaving better impression. And if he wears 2k£ t shirt but can't pay for some fast food on date then it leaves controversial impression like this book.

??? There is a lot of fantastic works on internet. You may ask author to use it and on the same time promote someone artistic work, you can ask someone to make something specially for your work. You can use just picture from works included into the story? You say something but you didn't give any argument about why use picture in any sense related to story? I am not against using some pictures if it's indeed included into story. But for example using Uchiha madras as cover to Daily life story is nonsense and most people will click into it BCS of uchiha madara. The same situation is in this book when author promote story non related picture from another anime.

What's your point? fanfic is for lazy??? Fanfic is to write story from another perspective, change some events and this create whole new story. Background may be the same but story is different.And using totally didn't changed picture of character from anime/manga or it's cover is totally lazing around. Sorry but if you think that writing fanfiction is just for lazy then I don't have that small iq to discuss with you further.

And it seems it's true as he didn't add any shit in a month.

Using cover at first glance from other anime or manga is just plain suggestion that story is about it. It doesn't mean story is bad but whole assumption that he use it is telling me he is lazy AF to even find some work not from anime or manga cover xd.

When I see cover from another anime/manga/movie or whatever and there is none of this in story it's insta 1 star. Thank you.

Like wtf bro? you just copied my review and posted it witchout any change?

i prefer more perverted/dark/intelligent humour. stupid jokes are okay but there are some restrictions or it can't be whole story base. But thanks for recommendations though. At least i liked this authors other story.

Before someone will come and say you don't know Florida man. I don't know nor I care. Only thing i know that there is a lot stories even similar to this one with stupid MC on similar level even witchout him being from Florida. So besides trend on Florida man i don't see any effect wow in this style.

I have read it until chapter 39 and revived it but honestly this is totally not my climate. I like too some stupid jokes but not when MC have iq smaller than my shoe size. If you are interested then see review.

I am very conflicted about reviewing this novel. On my own I would propably never read it but someone recommended it to me. Having read it untill chapter 39 i can for sure say that it's not for me. For sure it's well written novel, have unique background and sense of humour but it's boring. For sure some people will like it as free time novel to pass time but it require liking very slow paced novel with dense AF MC. Our main character is just stupid. For most of people's first reaction when selling some item who someone treat as treasure would be getting yourself into topic and learning about it. Sorry our MC still will play indifferent even when he need lifespan. It's just boring and wrong method to making it into comedic undertone and on the same time making MC plainly stupid and unlogical. When for some people stupid things are funny but I there are some logical limitations to this. For the author I can't say wrong thing as I liked his Villain cultivator series very much but for me work that he is creating right now is total regress to what he was doing earlier. Maybe this is whole other style of novels but earlier he had whole universe ready to explore and now he is limited to small planet with stupid MC with iq under my shoes.