OhayoSenpai

Why would you delate all your reviews and leave only 6 good ones? I came in to check it out but just from this review situation I'll leave there with this review. See ya.

I love how you delated nearly every comment that said about earlier plot... You wrote it yourself and later you clear out every comment that was negative about it. Did you write the plot where there was NTR? Yeah you did. So don't use your re-editing the plot to hide what you did. The fact that you had the balls to write NTR and later make MC reconcile with our tainted female lead should be known to readers to let them consider your writing style.

Can't really say much when it's only beginning but for sure you spent more time about MC info than about book... First you should make story i think?

I am seriously out of webnovel for a long time. This site produce some really good works, have potential but i think contracted authors doesn't have required flexibility snd works are getting worse with time. Webnovel from some really good app with potential for good works had become English Faloo with lower work potential. As for your work i will check it tomorrow.

Not everyone have to like novels like this? And what's the point of readers only liking the story? in that case every Novel would have 5 star because you turn your brain off?From what I see you are dumb like most readers going everywhere and 5 star everything even some petty works written by 10yo. Honestly don't you can't even read with understanding, i wrote that i would usually not read it but someone recommended it. So what's your point? Dying to have your 10 seconds of attention from random dude in internet? Go grow up.

Having read it untill chapter 30 i could consider as my life achievement because I lost maybe 10 or more iq in that time. Story is not bad in a sense but whole idea about system and characters relationships is totally unreasonable. Let's start from the system... How many iq I am supposed to have to even continue reading novel when MC on start get sharing an, gluttony and some other poop? Let's not talk that's its not his Martial Spirit and it's just his talent... Whole skills are unreasonable and even naming wooden sword gave me feeling of being totally treated as brain dead. We on the start have bunch of time skips and in meantime MC gets some random stuff that makes him OP when he is 4 yo. sorry but even if it would be my son I would just propably dissect him and check if he is human.Now let's move to character relationships. It's outrageous... It's not bland , it's not bad it's just plainly unreal, unlogical and stupid. Ohhhh my son is 4 years old and create his own breathing method. Ohh my son is 4 yo and is thinking about banging me. That Bibi Dong is propably more stupid than original. Whole idea of justifying his talent as genius when he is only 4yo is outrageous and that's why people usually don't write novels starting from early age and just give big time skip to 6yo.Generally just summing it up even if whole story would be perfect and it would be best novel in the world I don't recommend it. There is bunch of good novels but you can't easily get back your lost iq that is lost at least in first 30 chapters.( Don't know about later)Story could be good with this setting but whole story feels more indifferent and easy than Wish fullfilemt r18 novels where MC is literally God on the start.

Novel whatever i would say is okay and I Can even recommend it to read. Problem there is female character. Maybe it's just me but it gives off kinda forced female MC vibes. I mean I don't have anything against females but it's kinda like writing domineering CEO with MC as male adding to it gay romance. Story as a whole is okay but idea of having female MC in world like this Yuri sometimes makes me think about domineering CEO as a gay novel.

I hyped myself for reading this but sadly oIam disappointed. I like akashi from KnB and COTE series and it could be mega combination. Start is witchout any sense, full of loopholes. Akaji or whatever is this name written escaped from white room, then what about akashi? Whole idea making him start from white rum ruin whole story. Why not just reborn as akashi in COTE world with his family like he had it in KnB? More logical, open more options, MC background is not limited to white room which is just a rat hole witchout exit for character development. IQ of MC is maximum 100 which is below the average... He seems like cringe dude wanting to be cool but still end up being someone's lapdog. I had seen few COTE fan fictions and to this moment only one was somehow readable. People too much rely in them on the plot... Why you create some character and end up following the same plot. If i want to reread the story I doesn't need some cringe dude in it. Generally whole idea for the story is one of maybe the best on site but as for the work? It is total trash.

Bruuuh. He has gotten element manipulation and he still has in system water ball skill bunch of others. He literally try to research his own powers witchout any knowledge and it's totally unlogical. His powers are there only for show and nearly never used. Story have nearly the same communication between characters as original, some reactions are nearly the same even when MC knows the plot. EQ of MC is slightly lower than my shoe size( I am not big foot ). System is just some style of chest code that enable author to make nonsense from the air and it doesn't have any real significance in plot as taking it out of the hat is nearly of the same bullshit.

He means Solo Leveling. It's literally just nearly the same story with nothing adding in monologues and some slightly other powers. And whole communication between characters feels like you would read original work instead of fan fiction so it's accurate.