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Oh Man... The first motive that motivated me to read this story was the original cover that was beautiful and instigating. Now, sorry if I'm been rude, I don't want to pass this image, but the new cover when compared with the other is... well... it's a shi%t$. It's horrible. If it's possible and the actual creator of the cover don't claimed anything I suggest that you change it back, it would bring many more viewers.
Hm, how can I say it? The story is not fluid at all. It's difficult to understand the situations. So, if I can suggest something is to explain things better and with more concision, please stop with the massive info dumping and make it more enjoyable and natural. And in the end, I think it's better make shorter sentences instead of the big ones that we have for now in your novel. But I have to say that I'm cheering for you author-san, keep improving.
It's a wolderful story which give us a plenty of concepts to reflect. One of the things that gave me much satisfaction while reading is the concept of 'good' and 'evil' that is wonderfully worked by the author. Other concept that I liked is the law of cause and consequence, what you sow you reap even though you are the MC. The names of the planet, continents and cities make us reflect about how lightly we use these names and how far we are to truly live their meanings. These things that I said coupled with a pair of other things give this story a very rare realysm which is dificult to find in other novels and although the final part of the story is rushed it is still pleasurable. I'm cheering for your other works, author-san! I'm sure you will improve more and more and create other amazing stories for all of us.
And here we go, termites! I had been waiting for them appear up until now. I was just curious about how they would interact with the ants. Ah! It would be mind blowing if we can see other colonies of different species of ants in the future, just the reactions of Anthony is making me itch of anticipation.