poppydo12
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Ahhh finally they confessed their feeling for each other. And I love how cheesy it was in their own humorous way. Absolutely fabulous, god work! If i may point out a thing (nothing negative) there are som instance where you switch from first person point of view and third point of view. And it can be a bit confusing at times. Either way i think your writing style is amazing. And i love this story, I am happy you found the inspiration to continue this book. Every time i read each chapter i feel like i have my heart in my throat. I am looking forward to see how this story is going to unfold. Because you’re doing a hell of a good job! (Excuse my french)
Damn, this was not somthing I thought would happen this chapter. I see things are getting serious now. I hope things get better in the next chapter! Good work author san. I really could not breathe in this chapter and my heart was beating uncontrollably 🙈
“You’re beautiful and I’m handsome, we look like a good couple indeed” was quite out of character for Liam to say. I never thought Liam to be so self absorbed to say somthing like that. It would of make sense if he said somthing like this. “we have a lot in common and are well acquainted with each other etc” that would of sound more like his type of personality... idk i just really thought that comment was weird.