Alex_Hunt

What I like the most about this novel is it's pacing & comprehensive background, writer has done a good job in decreasing any cliches, though it will be good if the mc is given some kind of urgency or setback, to make it thrilling.

Fun fact - telegram's CEO has over hundred children through sperm donations 😅😂

Damn!!!

Cheers bro, but harem or no harem is unnecessary, make sure to keep it a tease and add some smut chapters here and there and some flirt scenes with heroines, you don't have to make the relationships permanent but just keep it authentic and novel

From Chinese novel is this dude from

Actually this novel is brainless for some reason, what he is using is called skills not talents and with garps experience, there is no way he doesn't know that, now you are saying such a prodigy exists then even with garps nature won't he have some murderous thoughts about him, after all he wants peace.

Minato was not from senju, he just had super perception which together with flying thunder God became a deadly combo, his style was obviously was of a fast assassin. And Taking about Naruto, well they had it coming, I mean while kushina was pregnant, nine tails chakra must have interfered with the fetus which suppressed or destroyed his uzumaki bloodline, if it weren't for ashura chakra inside him, you could have forgetten the huge chakra reserves & sage body he acquired later. Basically he sacrificed his innate potential for some acquired potential when he became a Jinchūriki. Without kurama, even if he had trained max he would have been a rookie kage not super shadow due to the power of nine tails. And rest of his physique was strengthened due to him being a Jinchūriki not because he was uzumaki, his bloodline was already suppressed, that's why he didn't retain the iconic red hair and had his father's features with fox beard

Although fight was good, but i dont understand why you are trying to make mc some hero. Being a hero, you'll have burdens. Look at shikamaru, he surrendered still he became a chunin, and a use such a epic fight so soon, how will you explain about mc's power up, healing & black flash, his phenomenal water control & pseudo lightning armor, I mean in just six months you made him this strong when he was just a nobody, and nobody thinks it's suspicious 😅😕😓

Too much cringe, my soul has floated out of my body 🤯😱😅

Actually you are making sense by sasuke's leveling, but is this fight nessesary? Does being chunin so important? You kept saying that mc wants a low profile now you are making him fight a pseudo level 2 cursed sasuke who is comparable to a berserk Naruto, fuck sharingan, now orochimaru & danzo would more interested in him, because after hiruzen dies, danzo first priority would be to kidnap mc.