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Genreo1mthPostedtl;dr: Decent story, lessened by ai used to increase wordcount. Decent story with a great start, but overall tedious. 40 chapters in I'm basically struggling to keep reading. The author has made it known that he uses chatgpt to help "enhance" his writing style, but it just seems to me like a way to increase the wordcount. Just about every paragraph I read can be condensed into 10 words because of how much fluff is added to them. Imagine if something in the book could be explained as beautiful, it would instead be written as "exquisitely ephemeral, transcendent in its visage, unequaled in its splendor," maybe a few times could be acceptable, but this happens every single paragraph. I understand the author added chatgpt to help increase his knowledge of words, but you can do that without making every single sentence seem like you're trying to reach your quota in an essay, or you can also buy a dictionary.
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"Switching to my first person perspective"?
Switching to my first-person perspective, I found myself sighing in a rare moment of relaxation. The deckchair welcomed me as I leaned back, granting a comfortable respite from the scorching sun. I offered a silent appreciation to the umbrella casting its shade, a protective shield against the sun's relentless rays. - Genreo1mthCommented
He just said "A man with no prejudice against mutants" and "A personal stake in the x-men," you don't need him to say it again here.
"And," Evan's voice carried a note of emphasis, "he harbors no hate or grudge against mutants." His words held a certain gravity, a realization that underscored the uniqueness of this potential alliance. "With his own son being a mutant and a part of the X-men," Evan concluded, his voice holding a trace of finality, "your couldn't possibly hope for a better ally." - Genreo1mthCommented
Ok dude, he laid a simple plan and this guy's being written like he's met a godly strategist. It's a decent story so far but you don't need a paragraph to explain that he was impressed.
He pondered why Evan hadn't taken precautions earlier. He mused on how Evan's choice to let him perceive the danger firsthand was more impactful. The visceral experience of imminent peril held more weight than abstract warnings. The unfolding events were like a stage, where every move had been calculated to perfection, offering choices and unveiling consequences. - Genreo1mthCommented
Why would complimenting her penmanship bring on someone's wrath? Doesn't make sense.
It would bring the wrath of very important people such as her mother, and godfather who for the latter was always listening, always ever knowing each word in the base for him to know. - Genreo10mthCommented
God he’s nowhere near perfect, and hearing him repeat that everytime someone points out a flaw is getting annoying. I would say hopefully he gets that mentality out of his head but at this point I doubt that would happen.
"As if my mind is weak enough to have some person talking about feelings influence it, besides, I'm perfect." - Genreo10mthReplied to Jrar
Not so perfect now
It's like he was a toddler drawing while she is an architect. - Genreo10mthCommentedCh 281 Backyard Brawl
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This is getting more difficult to read
This book has been deleted. - Genreo11mthPosted
TLDR: Just watch the movie A nice premise, but terrible execution. Reading this is like reading a movie script, but worse. These series have been turned into video games for players to experience, yet there is no deviation of any kind in the plot or character actions. Take one of the characters, Angelica for example, she does the exact same actions as the movie protagonist from resident evil, she says the same things, comes to the exact same conclusions as the characters. It’s like I’m just reading a movie script but with commentary on the side.
- Genreo11mthCommentedCh 59 Thoughts on the New Game
- Genreo11mthCommentedCh 34 Just a Reminder, You Can Breathe and Speak!
- Genreo1yrReplied to Eclipse_Gate_GeneCh 17 Chapter - 17
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Ok is this supposed to be panacea’s exact power or is this a mix of skitter and panacea? Are you just adding abilities on, like a mental link with his creations?
I smile and continue walking while mentally commanding Skitter to deal with two of them while I deal with one on my signal. As soon as I get close enough, they jump out of their hiding spots, surrounding me and pointing their swords at me. - Genreo1yrCommented
Dad’s life*
Ori just huffs humorously in response, looks like his dead's life was worth at least one drink. Shaking his head, he steeples his fingers and glances over his shoulder, noting a group of Mox in the corner all wearing BD headsets. Judging by the serious expressions under them, they weren't getting their rocks off... Probably military sims if he had to guess by the preem guns sitting next to them. - Genreo1yrCommented
Simon is worse though
Shinso just sighs and takes another bite of his lunch. "Simon it is then." - Genreo1yrCommentedCh 260 A Plot
- Genreo1yrCommentedCh 22 CHAPTER 020(Merry Christmas)
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Lent
Immediately he began preparing for the battle, only managing to amass an army of 2,000 soldiers that he tried to equip with all the armors and weapons he had on his hands, and along with the retainers of Stephan that he landed to him for protection, went to prepare the battlefield ahead of the Turks and their puppet.