Redfang1990
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feel->fell
Bisected also works in place of beheaded...
I used a morse code translation app.
Darn I just wasted 20mins of my life translating this just to see it translated by the author 1or 2 paragraph later... :(
... .... .- .-- / .. ... / -.-. --- -- .. -. --. .-.-.- / .- .. .-. .--. --- .-. - .-.-.- / . -..- - . .-. -- .. ... .-.-.- translation Shaw is coming. airport. Extermis.
Emergency Rations
Correction Excellent apparently means medium green in chapter 19.
Excellent is Blue. The author said confirmed in a later paragraph.
Ohhh its a Flail then, not a Morningstar. Morningstar: spiked ball + stick Flail: spiked ball + chain + stick
23 chapter's in and I think this has great potential for a great fanfic. But i do think if you have the time you should come back to the first 6 chapters and edit them so they explain mc action better. p.s i don't like the fact that people are giving 2 star reviews because the mc uses alchemy or Truth had an appearance in the story. Because i think that these complaints aren't valid criticism there more of opinions then anything.
Thanks!!!
Can we talk about the disrespect that just happened!? My man was having an internal monolog while fighting another person!!! Than got mad about his opponent interrupting his internal monologing!!! The disrespect is strong in this one!
*"How could someone be so Depraved?"
Your comment was great till it got to the end. nearly got stroke trying to read it. . . . Have a like! ^-^
I bet this man never lost a game of Charades.