Your writing really pulls at my heart strings, I feel bad for Draco here. You convey his feelings of bitterness, self hatred and loneliness, after all he has been through very well.

The story seems like a different take to the typical FL stories, and romance novels. However the story still uses some pretty cliche plotlines for transmigration genere novels where the FL basically becomes good (tries to change their fate) upon realizing they transmigrated into the villian’s body. It also implements the typical transmigration aid or restrictions to help the lead in the journey, if you have read SVSS you will find the robotic voice guide very familiar. I couldn’t read past the first three chapters because it was too cliche, but it seems well written; worth a read if you are not sick of plotline cliches and not looking for something refreshing.