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Plural is dice. Singular is die
'But it doesn't spell Dice though... it spells DICES. As in plural.' - owener8mthReplied to EclipseWanderer
He lost abilities without having a choice. His fucking hatsu FORCED him into terrible position. All that to gain nerfed kamui after he had to take out his eye with a knife and it took away two of his abilities or his own hatsu would just walk away.I liked the reworked hatsu, but it was done poorly and left a bad taste in my mouth. Restrictions are part of the nen system, and people expect them. All the author had to do was give him garbage trades for some time and then make him decide to set some restrictions up. Would make sense within the universe and be actually clever. Instead, he was punished for thinking outside the box, which nen system heavily encourages.
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Chapter 20 was a huge disappointment. His own hatsu cripples him.I would have been fine with the nerf to his random ability. I would have even liked it, but taking away abilities he already has is stupid. Add on top bodily mutilation and his own ability screwing him over for breaking never established rules.Could have made it so he has beginner's boost for the first few months, and then you go to new monthly pulls.Might change my rating depending on the authors response or drop altogether.
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They locked me in a room. A rubber room.
"A second singles release isn't normal right? I'm not crazy?" Haley asked in a puzzled tone as she thought about the matter. - owener1yrCommented
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Scathach - owener2yrPosted
Mostly writing this review to right a wrong. This story does by no means deserve this low of a rating. Don't let the 1* reviews discourage you from reading this. It is superior to most stories on this website. Though there are some grammatical errors, they are fairly rare and don't subtract from your reading experience.
- owener2yrCommented
I actually enjoyed it a lot. Thank you for your amazing work.
Many people don't like the Bnha arc, but this arc is about the Mc growth. - owener2yrCommented
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Hunter x Hunter- - owener2yrReplied to lazyleo
Sauce please?
After all I was walking with drip seen and copied from hunter drip-woo and the successor of the northern drip sect. - owener2yrCommented
Only?
Rewards: 100000 EXP, Fire jutsu scroll, 50000 Ryo, Chakra enhanced kunai set. - owener2yrCommentedCh 13 Chapter 13
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The decision regarding Moka and Millim rubs me the wrong way. You already built something up and now you offload them on Kal. If they were introduced and the intention was clear from the beginning I don't think anyone would have cared. You are just throwing them away and it is kinda ruining my reading experience.
Ch 49 Ch. 49 One Century to another - owener2yrCommented
Wow. Same as killing 3 adjuchas? That's some weird scaling.
[Arrancars: 15 to 20 thousand points]