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well, I figured out the 'how'. you have a bunch if creepy dudes remove and replace their clothing. But WHY?! I have been in a few instances where I was required to change clothes. It would be faster and easier to have them change their own clothes. What purpose does it serve changing their clothes for them? If it is so they don't see the rags vs expensive clothing, that is thrown out quickly as they immediately start setting up a 'powerful' vs 'weak' dynamic which threw out any benefit of them being equalized by the use of uniforms. It just sits as CREEPY, which is why I felt the Why was more shocking than the How.
The green plain was not the only thing the students saw. There were three futuristic, huge buildings directly in front of them. The buildings were human images sculpted entirely out of glass. Each one stood at least sixty feet tall, but that was not the only thing that the field overlooked. They were standing on an elevated platform with a city in front of them, a hidden city. Everyone was already dressed up in a military uniform and there were technological marvels appealing to them all. - Work_In_Progress2yrCommented
Greater love has no one than this: to lay down one’s life for one’s friends. John 15:13
'Please, continue to live on Layla… thank you, for having been my best friend.' - Work_In_Progress2yrCommented
your mother was a banshee!
The ten soldiers that Leo had been training how to use Qi, started to run past the knight in a line. The knight wanted to intercept them, but Erin wasn't giving him any chances. He might be able to heal such a wound, but he had a bad premonition that turning his back on her might lead to a fatal outcome for him. - Work_In_Progress2yrReplied to Silakai
Well, win the fight, install Quinn as King by the end of the month... and he rules that any turn that retains intelligence and allegiance is legal.
"You're a Dhampir!" The hooded man said. - Work_In_Progress2yrReplied to Facepunch
The comment was actually about how stupid it was to put the inventory at that cost at level 5. real quick, do the math. if he saved ALL his points, what level could he have actually gotten inventory? My way would have allowed him to get it right now, and it would have been the ever present question "Should I get more inventory"? Doesn't really matter as the novel eventually catches a case of boring, then dies.
|NEW!| Inventory - Storage in the System which you can put things in. Physical contact is required before storing the item. 10000 Points - Work_In_Progress2yrCommented
Wow. Daughter calls her dad "General".
"Fine, fine whatever you want, how can I say no to my daughter." - Work_In_Progress2yrReplied to Xunafae
sure, but some chemicals react with or break down plastic. Glass is almost always still available. Now if you find a filled wax coated or florinated plastic bottle, be careful. Hydrofloric acid eats through everything else. so, you always need more types of test tubes .
Even though there were many there, if he took too much it would be suspicious and Quinn couldn't carry more than five without having to worry about them breaking or not. - Work_In_Progress2yrReplied to Leo_Franklin
an item / ticket / couple in a relationship dating lovers / in love seeing each other sharing a bed hot for each other inseparable oh so many terms that have similar meanings.
While Quinn walked down the hallway, he got quite a few looks from the other students, it wasn't strange to see someone carry an injured person in the school, but it was strange for a boy to carry a girl unless they were an item. - Work_In_Progress2yrReplied to Huntsman_2101
chapter one. No friends, a girl distances herself and is mocked for being near him. Now, he takes the same position as that girl had, wanting to distance himself to not be associated with the guy.
Looking at the people around them, Quinn could tell what the others were thinking. It was on their faces. Instinctively, Quinn moved away from Vorden, hoping that others wouldn't mistake the two of them as friends. - Work_In_Progress2yrCommented
wait, the 500 new arrivals are all dressed in uniform?! How? no even better: Why? getting recruits to change clothes quickly helps to indoctrinate them to do everything quickly... follow orders quickly. You changing their clothes while they are unconscious... just creepy and time consuming. wait did they have a machine for that? Again, why? If you have a machine that can undress and dress 500 people, why? Would you even need the people? Or are they actually all connected in a VR thing and are actually all not there?
The green plain was not the only thing the students saw. There were three futuristic, huge buildings directly in front of them. The buildings were human images sculpted entirely out of glass. Each one stood at least sixty feet tall, but that was not the only thing that the field overlooked. They were standing on an elevated platform with a city in front of them, a hidden city. Everyone was already dressed up in a military uniform and there were technological marvels appealing to them all. - Work_In_Progress2yrCommented
I drive for a living, so am often not near a toilet. Every single time I'm about to leave to make a delivery, I first go pee. It is smart. Now imagine a half filled bladder before the first bottle and bus ride that "For the 4th time, sit down and shut up, we will be there when we get there."
Quinn quickly went to the toilet before heading off with Sergeant Griff. His bladder felt like it was going to burst any second now because of the sheer amount of water that he had drunk. - Work_In_Progress2yrReplied to Work_In_Progress
I remember when I first looked at a 4K TV in a store. It had a test image displaying of an aerial shot of an island. I could see coconuts on the beach, footprints in the sand. It was then I realized my vision had NEVER been fully corrected. IRL, from that distance, with new glasses, I would see the beach as basically one uniform strip with no footprints or coconuts. Details show when I'm much closer. If I could see those details with my own eyes... I would take up photography! (As it is, if I focused a camera, it would wind up with fuzzy photos because the closer to perfect for my eyes, the fuzzier it is as the camera is correcting my vision - non digital cameras at least)
He took them back off and noticed that his vision only turned hazy when he put the glasses on. 'Wow,', he thought before he quickly rushed to his desk to grab a pencil. He proceeded to draw the letter "A" on the wall and stepped back. He continued to move back until his back had hit the wall that was on the other side of the room. The figure 'A' was still there, and he could see it clearly. - Work_In_Progress2yrCommented
I have worn eyeglasses for 40 years. I have once had a lens cut me, and that was when a softball bat hit my face (no catcher's mask). Plastic lenses (regular, poly carbonate, high index) do not crumble. They do not really break or bend unless hammers or the like are involved. Want a drop of blood because of them? He is repairing them and the tiny screwdriver slips as he fumbles, and the tiny tip jabs him. Now you have blood. similar stretches: As he tried to change the channel, the TV remote shattered. As he turned on the light switch, it sliced his hand open. As he beat on his memory foam pillow, it crumbled under his assault causing him to cough violently.
Unfortunately, the lens suddenly crumbled into pieces, one of the shards of plastic even created a deep gash in his thumb. - Work_In_Progress2yrReplied to BotwaCazadorCh 612 A Brief Interlude