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Deadrick3mthReplied to HotIce- Deadrick1yrCommented
So, nobody finds it weird that there are cameras in patient rooms?
Director Huang hurriedly said, "Don't be anxious. This matter has nothing to do with our hospital. After checking the surveillance cameras, we learned that a masked man entered your sister's ward and destroyed the camera inside. He should be the one who did this!" - Deadrick1yrReplied to Ceaseless_Voices
he got them from a quest, 3 of them
Ning Shi did not dare to be careless. He took out an armor-piercing arrow and put it on the bow. He held it in his mouth but did not fire. - Deadrick1yrCommented
I know that it has been commented on before. but author/editor, it is rather, not rauther. please let us know you are seeing this and try to fix in future cases
“Hmm, I guess the secret was to be still rauther than to try and walk while practicing it.” - Deadrick1yrCommented
as long as the demon is slumbering they are good. only one man could fight the demon and win
"Thanks, but we have to go. In which direction is the city of Xaanth?" Kigan looked around for the exit from the underground cave. - Deadrick1yrReplied to Khollan_Da_Esky
auto correct changed it on me
Well, that is to be expected. They can't have some dodgy malaka discovering my true identity and coaxing me into a fight to regain my lost status. - Deadrick2yrCommented
diseased, not deseased
"They are living in poor conditions, deseased, starving and are in rags, though from what I have seen, the town is exactly the opposite." - Deadrick2yrCommented
frown, not grown
Michalina helped Ryan drink some water, who then spoke with a grown, "ugh, the water tastes so bitter, yuck." - Deadrick2yrReplied to Tarbo
think "join this one" would be what the author is looking to say
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Ryan ran*
Ryan as fast as he could, but the creature was gaining on him when suddenly a door appeared in front of him. - Deadrick2yrCommented
were waiting *
Captain Estar, the new second in command, led the way through the army base to the inner courtyard where the rest of the soldiers was waiting for them. Enough long rectangular benches had been set near similarly shaped tables to accommodate them all. - Deadrick2yrCommented
were waiting, not was, was is singular were is plural
Captain Estar, the new second in command, led the way through the army base to the inner courtyard where the rest of the soldiers was waiting for them. Enough long rectangular benches had been set near similarly shaped tables to accommodate them all. - Deadrick2yrReplied to IP2
that makes more sense
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but non should be but none in the middle of the paragraph
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but non should be bit none in the middle of the paragraph
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"would being about" can be "would be about"
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you want "he knew better" here, and I think you want now instead of bow in the sentence prior
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what is thar supposed to be?
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