Hello author~ i have always wanted to write and Was always making stories in my head but I can never commit to one. So as Someone who really looked up to you and a big fan of yours, If its not much can you tell me how do You plan your whole plot and if i am not asking much, can you please give me some advice too? Thank you so much~ i hope you Prosper in your life!

Naurrrrrrr~ this is so heart wrenching

Ummm.... author theres a lot of misgendering i see here and there... i hope you fix it...

I am sorry... Disclaimer: i read dedicatly till 54 but after that i constantly skipped the chapters. With all honesty heres my review Oh god! This was toooo dramatic (like i dont think there was any rest in this roller coaster). i know dramas are needed in stories but this was too much of drama and excessive is never good. I didnt feel connected to any of the characters (not even the mc). There were so many charater that came out of nowhere, without explaination. so i was confused the whole time. talking about mc, he was my god! So fristrating! Writing: Its was good. but i cant deny that there were times when i would srunch in dissatisfaction with the continues use of ‘i’ Its like after i did this i did that and then i went there, i grabbed my bag. Which was a huge turn off for me. Plot: I cant really say as i dont havent read it dedicatly and i have read it riligiously. But as much as i have read, it couldnt see the purpose. maybe its just beacuse i came thinking it was all about romance and was dissapointed. but too much of twist and turn can get you dizzy. I am sorry i was brutually honest but i was just frustrated... might delete it after i come down from my frustration....

I am frustrated

I am so disheartened, i will have to forget and move on from another amazing novel... It is indeed very frustrating being poor... Bye bye my love~

No its allright, just sometimes it gives me that cringy wattpad stories that i used to read when i was 11, where vibe the author would start every sentence with ‘i’ and put up photos of every dress and destination instead of writting it in words. but its allright, thank you for taling my criticism in a good way and it was a good read.

I dont know but when authors specifies the brands and all, its just a huge turn off for me....