thanks for the story . can't wait for more after every chapter

I love the idea but not for me ,I don't know if you are adding unnecessary words to make the chapter longer sorry if it's just your writing but too much poetry but good luck with your story .

good idea but not for i don't why I Just can't stand the MC at all but am sure others will love your fic and good luck

ffs again a fanfic that I will stop reading it was a fun story but not for me any more good luck for next .

nice I see what u did, exterminate

OK I understand what's u are trying to do but there so many powers already with deing will ,hi can fly ,fire beam from his hand like iron man,frizz his enemy ,has and over power systems, super intuition, super speed and that's the power I can remember at the time the only useful a power he bet from spider man is super strength, that just my but I think u should have just gave him the deing will and if u really want something from Peter just his super intelligence would being super op.ps am sure many people will like your story but not for me.

was so excited until i found out the mc got hyper system quirk u don't need so many power to make a op mc but it's just me .do what you u like it's your story

fun but a little hard to read for me ,I love over power characters but to many different powers and is it not to write how to u every remember all the systems harry is using hope i can finish reading it one day I can only read 10 chapters with getting migraine. ps fun but painful to read.

sorry was very interesting because I like novel extra but I feel it's too convoluted my head hurts readingyour fanfic. it is your story but you should try to make the story flow better.

was really excited until I saw that he had no knowledge about the story good writing but nor me good luck

good read but time for me to stop I hate DBZ but loved the bleach ark good luck

thanks for giving us and endings at least

Sorry not a story for my good writing but with so much races any of the race is op enough but it's your story you can do what you want and good luck with your stories I will keep maiby I will find something that tickle ma fansy .

Sorry good story but cannot continue reading I don't know but it pisé me that every know what he is thinking but he is so oblivious just like the manga MC that he don't like good luck man but story not for me

realy compression legging lol dude what next his favorite underwear good luck story not for me

Was very interested but to many kami, Sama stop with it ffs you are not and we are not Japanese. from time to time it ok but so much that it's cringe a word I never thought I would say

Well rip the novel not the the 3 stodge just can't for your new novel

I was starting to lose hope u would continue but thanks for the chapter .

Good luck just make sure He does not clap your cheeks before he starts