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Think the american presidentual residence or however it’s designated.
I can appreciate the character development shown so far.
This one a hole cannot make.
I’m sorry, but this gotta be a plothole. How is our fl aware which dress was her intended???
Perpetual constipation.
Now i’ll be honest, despite the potential and Concept of using transformers “pre-war” is a truly great idea. It has quite a few issues aswell. Pros: 1. The concept is wonderful and clearly a hidden Gem. Cons: 1. Everything is basicly handed on a silver platter for the character. 2. The main character isn’t realistic in origin, skill and authority. 3. the character from what i can perceive a few chapters in is pretty much a “Mary Sue” *attention sucking blackhole with plot-armor as cherry on top* 4. Most of the other reviews doesn’t make any sense despite the full star votes and leads to a false impressions. Summary: great idea, poorly executed... Solution: Start with a somewhat humble or older character could be one. That’s merely one solution that probably won’t fix anything at this point. Comment: Author did note his inexperience and it’s fair quality for a first~
Recommending refining the desertion from the castle to the cemetary. As of the moment it looks pretty lazy and sloppy*
Now it did end well and all. Do imagine if he missed though** Bad idea to throw your biggest advantage without a *very* good reason.
*Heal*
**Sole Exceptions**