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No worries, that question will be revealed slowly in later arcs. Thanks for dropping by!
hey, thanks, really appreciate it. but i already got some several arc kicking in and im in the middle of weaving them together :D
Pas d'inquiétude, l'IA sera utilisée à bon escient. Je veille à maintenir un équilibre, même si certains éléments peuvent sembler trop puissants. Je préfère les introduire progressivement pour ne pas perturber le rythme des premiers chapitres. Petit spoiler : l'un de ses futurs rivaux sera une IA spécialisée en assurance qualité. Après tout, de quoi un malware a-t-il peur ? D'un anti-malware, évidemment. Merci d'être passé et pour ton retour ! PS: sorry if i didnt use the right wording, so here is the english version in case i got it wrong: The AI will be used correctly, no worries. There will be balance of the what looks like overpower. I just hold back for now since the tempo and pace will be disrupted if it all go out in the early chapters. Spoiler alert: one of his future rival is AI QA. Because what is a malware afraid of? that's right, anti malware. Thank you for dropping by!
sure, if its fits with ongoing arc i made why not :)
Thanks for giving the story a try and taking the time to leave detailed feedback—really appreciate it. Honestly, you're just a few chapters away from many of the things you brought up. The turning point that reveals Raven's long-term goal, his more nuanced motivations, and deeper world interactions is just around the corner. But I get that not everyone wants to wait for that moment, and that's fair. Still, I’m glad you found the core premise intriguing, and I’ll take your points seriously as I continue polishing the pacing and emotional investment. Either way, thanks again for reading up to Chapter 10 and dropping by. Wishing you the best in your next reads!
thank you :D
nope, just pure action. thanks for dropping by!
Hey, thanks for dropping by! Yeah, just like any bosses in MMO, Duskrunner can talk, he just dont feels like it when he havent tamed yet by Raven. :D