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You can choose whatever you want because at the end it is your story. But, I prefer non harem. Also, I ask this question because it felt weird that since the end of the last chapter and the beginning of this chapter. About how you wrote that you want Ye Lingling and Dugu Yan to be his woman because since the first chapter until now. He hasn’t or you haven’t shown in his character that he would be a person with a harem. And it was a bit out of character for him to consider or trying for them to be his woman. Because you have written him as that he wants nothing to be part of the group of Tang San or be connected to him, and especially Dugu Yan because she is heavily connected to the journey of Tang San. So, for me it was out of character that he is trying to get them both, and he seems like a person that wants things naturally and not forced like you wrote in the end of the last chapter. Furthermore, you have show him as someone that wants to train and get stronger, but with his abilities. Not relying on Dugu Yan to get herbs. They can be friends but it will be out of character because you have show him as a person that wants to get stronger, but if he is trying to seducing Dugu Yan it will be out of character because he is a person that doesn’t force things and doesn’t try to seduce to get stronger.

Thanks for the Chapter!👍👍👍👍 Is this a harem novel

Thanks for the Chapter!👍👍👍 What you can do is be like FictionOnlyReader, the author that writes the fanfiction Naruto: The Outsiders Resolve. The author puts out 3 chapter every Monday or Tuesday, but sometimes the author puts it out 2 chapter that week. Or when the author is too busy or burnout he skips a week, and then puts the next two or three chapters tha Monday or Tuesday. That model has been working out good with that author, because he used to have the same problem as you. Anyway, just giving advice. Keep up the Good Work!👍

Thanks for the Chapter!👍👍👍. You, know I don’t mind that his love interest is lily. He has great chemistry with her, and it would be really interesting if that can cause a big effect in the timeline because that means that Harry wouldn’t be born!😂😂

You know, I would of prefer he joined Sakuna family. It would be much interesting and more dynamic than joining the Loki family

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Thanks for the Chapter!👍👍👍👍 You know I prefer Silas being with Kate over Alice. I don’t the way that you wrote Alice doesn’t fit with the personality of Silas. He is more intuned with Kate and their personality mesh well. With Alice, what I feel that every time that you write about them it feels forced, while with Kate it doesn’t feel force.

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Thanks for the Chapter!👍👍👍 Is this a harem?