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EndeAnfang

EndeAnfang

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  • EndeAnfang
    EndeAnfanga month ago
    Replied to Peryite

    Yeah that's pretty obvious but why though? That's what I'm looking for. Just as is it's fine but kinda shallow imo.

  • EndeAnfang
    EndeAnfang2 months ago
    Commented

    To anyone wondering about these "curse spirits" in this arc, they are most probably based on the series Kagewani(Shadow crocodile). It's a great series about UMA's, though the animation style is quite peculiar, you'll still find it really interesting if you have any interest in UMA's. Highly recommended for to watch, 2 seasons with total of 26 episodes.

  • EndeAnfang
    EndeAnfang2 months ago
    Commented

    There seems to be some mistake with the chapters numbering, not sure if it affected the story but there are 2 chapter 810 listed. The second 810 and 811 are the same chapters.

  • EndeAnfang
    EndeAnfang2 months ago
    Replied to Doyenro

    Wow, the ending was really lack luster. Great job in translating the story, it wasn't perfect but it was great, thanks.

  • EndeAnfang
    EndeAnfang2 months ago
    Posted

    Great story, lot of potential. The Mc is kind of system reliant however the system doesn't control him, one of the best system story in the site. HOWEVER, the ending was so rushed that it felt like nothing has been resolved, the best way to describe this story from start to end is like your sneeze being edged. It feels good st the start but feels terrible at the end.

  • EndeAnfang
    EndeAnfang2 months ago
    Commented

    Tl, is that how the story ends? Is this the last chapter? Thanks btw.

  • EndeAnfang
    EndeAnfang2 months ago
    Posted

    It exist. That's the best way I can describe this story. Majority of the story is narrated, hardly any conversations between characters. Almost everything is being described by the narrator which makes reading this story like you are reading a thesis paper where the author inserts a few quotes here and there. The story premise itself is really interesting and I really tried to like the story but because of the narration and the story itself being bland it makes loving this story kinda difficult. The main reason I found the story bland/boring is because it focuses on 2 main points, first is the rise of the destroyed Astraea Familia and the second is the story of some goblin in the dungeon, and no I'm not kidding about the second part. The Astraea Familia story is really interesting to the point where I still read the story despite it just being narrated but the goblin story is just plain boring and ruins the pacing of the story.

  • EndeAnfang
    EndeAnfang2 months ago
    Posted

    A fresh take in the Pokemon world. Not everything revolves around the system so this is more enjoyable compared to other stories of the same genre. Mc has been handled quite beautifully imo, she's not just your generic shounen/ system slave protagonist. Pair it with side characters who are actually characters and not cardboard cutouts and you get a compelling/interesting story. Now here's the problem, some chapters are missing like 80% of the story so some scenes doesn't make any sense. Other than this pretty huge downside, everything else is great. Would recommend.

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  • EndeAnfang
    EndeAnfang2 months ago
    Replied to EmptyTag

    Yep, just met whatever god you believed in and they said your story sucks.

  • EndeAnfang
    EndeAnfang2 months ago
    Replied to EmptyTag

    I just did