Derpychaos
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they were saying the first usage of his should be her. "see his brother giving money"
understandable. I apologize.
not really but still
she also just punched them in the nuts to take them down
I do want to say that I am completely fine with you doing this I just wanted to let you know that they would be different
I hate to be rude but kinetic energy does not equal chakra though. kinetic energy is the energy of movement which is why it works well as a shield like Captain America's. It stores the energy of movement and cancels out the force behind attacks. Chakra while it is an energy, it would be more similar to chemical energy or some other kind of energy that can fuel our bodies and easily transform into other types of energy.
I really love the story. I just wanted to let you know that Naruto is 11 at the start of canon and while Naruto is that age Kakashi is 27. It doesn't matter that much. Again I just wanted to let you know. I am enjoying your story
everything okay?
I'm sorry.
I think it's more like Mana Rope from "The Gamer"
I like Fabvl a lot but my personal favorite is Divide.
the newest manga chapter that just came out I believe
I'm sorry to nitpick but with all of the things he added I really feel he should have gotten more than just a slight pain. you said it depends on what he adds and he added a whole bunch of OP things in one night. I think that is worthy of more than just a slight pain. Again I am sorry for nitpicking. It just bothered me slightly.
yes!! the great peach!!