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In CFYOW Yoruichi confrimed that she has zanpaktou but she is stronger without using it quote: “How rude. I have a regular Zanpakutō. It’s just that in my case, I’m stronger when I battle using Taijutsu alone. It’s something of a daily routine pacifying my sword which is always sulky thanks to that.”
Small error only descendants true maou have 12 wings others have only 2
I do not know whether it is deliberate or not, but by writing that they ignore him because he dont have destruction power you change their personality to something other than in the novel and anime. The Gremory family was known for their forbearance even in the anime, this shows in their dealings with Sairaog. After that you write that he is condemned to be a low-class devil, but everyone born in noble families is born a higher-class devil.
Merciless to interrupt further chapters at such a moment.
I don't know how you want to finish 3rd season of middle school, but if you want to write until the end of the canon that is not completely changed, Shun has to lose or not play at all, the best idea would be to go to America for a year and come back to high school. That's my opinion in this situation.
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