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Alys9914dCommentedthe dog is named Max
"Ou … Dabao, don't mess around. I want to sleep a little longer."- Alys991mthCommented
if it is not a bother would you like us your readers to help you with your grammar problems? I am not trying to be mean or rude but I think your English might improve if that is something you are interested in. However I do not want you to feel obligated to change your grammar. when you write a book or story you want to have fun and injoy it so please don't feel pressured to do anything to your story that you don't want to .
That's my first ever fanfic. English is my third language. I have the idea some time ago and start writing, when becomes a little big I thought in share with anyone who wants to read. Any feedback is appreciated. - Alys991mthCommented
become stronger as fast as he possibly could
When he had been assigned to a team, he had wished that he could just become the sole apprentice of a skilled jonin. Get around all the grunt work and become as powerful as possible as fast as he could. - Alys993mthReplied to JustHavinFunReadin
you never know what the author might do
Finally, Yusei understood why the person in the house was nicknamed the Ruler of Dragons in the future. However, contrary to Yusei and Jaden's thoughts, Yumi trembled with enthusiasm in the back as she stared at the girl standing by the door: 'M... Mom!' - Alys993mthCommented
so the dad is either seto of yugi.I am betting that it is Seto who is the father.
Finally, Yusei understood why the person in the house was nicknamed the Ruler of Dragons in the future. However, contrary to Yusei and Jaden's thoughts, Yumi trembled with enthusiasm in the back as she stared at the girl standing by the door: 'M... Mom!' - Alys993mthPosted
this story was very exciting and was able to capture and hold my attention unlike the other stories I have read that either end too soon , get paused, take too long to update, or is so bland and boring to keep reading. so even though I wish that Freya could have had a child I was able to enjoy this story to the end.
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this has excellent potential
eevee - Alys995mthCommentedThe truck they showed up in had all the extra materials they might have needed as well as the appliances intrinsic to the house like the oven and refrigerator. They replaced any damaged or decayed pieces of the walls , rewired the whole house for the most modern electrical model and checked the water lines and septic situation all in under four hours. I found it crazy how efficient the company was at this job that might take purely humans a whole day or two normally. Still I gave the Machoke a wide grin and a pose when they packed up and left after they finished up.-
- Alys995mthCommentedCh 73 New Content Coming Soon!
- Alys996mthCommentedNodding her head, Yuugao waited until Hana was finished and then asked Ikari to stand so that they could do the requested tattoo. Once it was done he looked down at it and smiled. "That one is for you, kaa-san."
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I have read and seen both the books and the movies and I personally think that the changes you made are very nice and exciting. there is nothing wrong with changing things in the original story. an example is when she didn't let Peter escape and set black free. there was also saving Cedric from death. and the keys are a nice addition. the reason I like this story is probably because of another Harry Potter story called Harry potter and the Rise of the protector you can read it on webnovel.
Ch 226 I Don't Even Know Why I'm Writing This - Alys996mthCommented
Red Ketchup
Her son was an energetic child – so energetic in fact, that it bordered on hyperactivity and as a result, was often easily distracted from his studies with Professor Oak and the little class that he taught in his spare time. The Professor had noticed this and had told her that he thought that Ash should be tested for any learning problems that were often found in those that couldn't stay focussed for long periods. Delia just waved the Professor's comment off with a statement that Ash's father was the same as his age. Professor Oak immediately backed off after the statement as he knew who Ash's father is/was: the legendary Red Ketchum. - Alys996mthCommented
this is the correct answer
C. Doma - Alys996mthCommented
doomed this content is doomed
This continent is doom. - Alys996mthCommented
sudden not suddenly. up not upsdo not wish for a sudden power up.
"Nothing is free in this world Lucas, I became a Lance but there is a price to pay for it. Don't wish for a suddenly power ups, you have to work hard in order to become stronger…remember that", said my brother as he started walking away. - Alys998mthCommented
Raven Branwen is the spring maiden and she can be found in vacuo. Winter will become the winter maiden and she resides in atlas
Each of the four original kingdoms each had a single maiden that they guarded zealously when they discover who it is. vale had the fall maiden , mistral the summer maiden , vacuo the winter maiden and atlas the spring maiden. due to the nature of the maiden's power however keeping the power contained and hidden was very hard. when the previous maiden died one of two scenarios happened , the first was that she passed the power to whoever was on her mind when she died if they were female or it choose the most suitable vessel in the kingdom. - Alys998mthCommented
can should be can't in this paragraph.
Kazuto acts very maturely for his age that Midori can bring herself to talk to him like she was talking to a child but to an adult. - Alys998mthCommented
with mokuba in the lead, we followed
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