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Was just about to add that.
that dialogue sounds a bit awkward.
describe
*spare
Wasn't it female?
Anger should be wrath.
Oh Jesus, good on you.
Man, if I thought the last chap was a copout, this is even worse.. One of the worst backpedals to make is reviving a character you killed off. Even if it was always the plan, it just comes off as cheaply folding to complaints from readers. This is a situation where you probably lose either way now. Well, what's done is done. Let's see where it goes.
Gunna be honest, you probably ain't keeping that promise when you hit proper medical if your talking like nursing school, practicals, etc..... expect to have no free time.
Feels pretty cheap to kill one of the mons off like this, but meh.
remind
Should've killed her.
I really hope she doesn't become an important character. I already hate her.
Quality
I died again recently
So, like a qipao or cheongsam?
No problem. I just kinda throw out correction suggestions on instinct at this point. Great work regardless of the grammar issues. It's not anywhere near the worst for it anyway.
"what gave me away" maybe