drake2378

heads up this is a repeat of the previouse paragraph author.

story is exelent. but the translation sucks at times. like calling spirit particles. spirit children. for about 30 chapter's without the mistranslation being fixed.

i love the idea of most cultivation novels. its just there are few very good ones that get story progression right like lord of mysterys.. have read quite a few and the fact that 70 too 80% of cultivation novels write the majority of villians as the whole " i maybe over 1000 years old faught countless battles and have trancended the human body phisically mentally and spiritually. but i am still going to make terrible brain dead short term plans. and throw a tantrum falling into mc's plan. cause the writter wants to write the 30th face slapping scene in this story " also cultivation mc's tend to be hipocrits. read one where he stole a sects treasure. they rocked up to his home and faught his allies to get back. then mc goes how dare you get mad at me and hurt my people im going to destroy your souls. both supposedly rightchess factions fighting.

story was fun and decent but it has the same problem quite a few translated by ai or ai assisted storys have. about 15 chapters or so in during hulk movie events. the whole not x but y descriptors that plague any text written by ai in english. what is weird is translation started mostly okay before this happened. noticed this in a lot of storys on here after the first 15 maybe 20 chapter's these ai issues start skyrocating like the poster at first cared but then did not bother to edit anything ai sounding out anymore

damn noticed the ai touch. not major but noticible. the whole does not x they y thing bots are super obsessed with. besides that everything looked perfect. will probably still read as that one anoying thing is not enough to ruin the story. probably used a grammer bot considering most of it is pretty coherant so not generated from scratch

so glad to hear this! a fic with a male mc on this site where there is no harem but romance can be part of it. ether people have male mc's have harems on here or have zero intrest what so ever. there is no inbetween in most. nice to find an auther and story that is diffrent in that regard. don't need anything in depth just the mc feeling more human is great

he does not. he can mold chakra but he can only barely do some jutsu as his chakra control outside his body sucks though not impossible like lee.. also fun fact. water walking tree climbing and stuff where its more chakra still clinging to your body lee can do. its more projecting chakra outwards as a jutsu or genjutsu. guy was just that built diffrent that he trianed his body into bridging the gap through his dads lessons.

Thanks for the chapter. I forgot it was April first till halfway through reading it haha

Thanks for the chapter!

Thanks for the chapter!