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MrTrixer

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Im a guy who likes fantasy and like reading novels about reincarnation and world transfers. I also like to try to think about new monsters and will one day write a fantasy story myself

2018-12-30 JoinedSweden
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  • MrTrixer
    MrTrixer9mth
    Replied to SeraphWedd

    He used the glasses midway through the fight as well to confirm the golems location and to see if it was still moving around.As for them being adjustable so that it only affect the things in front of him was never mentioned before, it was either everything around him while equipped or nothing at all once they were removed.Another part im curious about, why didnt Lilith question how he found something so rare in such a short amount of time..

    Ch 83 Preparation Takes Time and Money
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  • MrTrixer
    MrTrixer9mth
    Replied to Banaman

    he was capable to love cats long before he became a dungeon master.

    Ch 79 You are Who You are
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  • MrTrixer
    MrTrixer9mth
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    He used those glasses during the golem fight, and he shouldve been close enough that both Lillith and Michelle were within range considering that he was close enough in those tunnels to issue orders to them and that ge was running around all over the place. As for his luck, well.. You mentioned that he is insanely lucky alongside the fact that they will open a gate to a random world soon, so i guess he will luckily get the earth connected soon and that in turn might make Lucifer come to the dungeon as his ally since that world is special to him or something like that. Cause, you know, luck. :Pbtw, how come you dont mention the total income and expenses of the DP lately? It feels like the math doesnt check out here but it is hard to make an estimation sine we dont have the exact numbers anymore. :/

    Ch 83 Preparation Takes Time and Money
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  • MrTrixer
    MrTrixer9mth
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    Sigh, so you changed his personality again, what is it, the 3rd? maybe the 4th time? It is kinda hard to get to know your main character if youre gonna change him to a different person everytime like this you know.All other characters are mostly generic in this story and dont really stand out that much, the only one with a proper personality is Ein, but changing him so drastically over and over again will just throw us readers off, making it harder to focus on the story.

    Ch 81 Calm Before the Storm
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  • MrTrixer
    MrTrixer9mth
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    Kinda rude to leave the guests though, they are all royalties and came to see him in person, he left shortly after just because the two elf girls caught the attention of the elf princes. Then again, he have never been a king before, so i guess that make sense. Lilith is gonna have to work overtime as the prime minister to cover for him though..

    Ch 80 A Passionate Night [R18]
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  • MrTrixer
    MrTrixer9mth
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    well, that was a confusing chapter, he gave up all of the crops, the time he needed to fortify the dungeon and much more, all for the sake of the cat people of Bestia, and that passion was something he had even on earth where he even had a hard time to kill feline monsters even, and now all of a sudden we get this confession from him, how the heck does that make any sense? why wouldnt he be sad or even cry if his favorite cats were to die? Same with the kids, anyone would at least be sad or even cry if they spent so much time with them. Its like a sibling were to die, you might hate them or be indifferent towards them as a person, but you will most definetely feel sorrow if you learned of their departure. But according to this confession, there was nothing? that soesnt make sense, did he dedicate his life to help support the orphanage because he was told or even forced to work for them? You cant just have one single emotion in life, you either have them all or you dont. He felt anger, he felt rage, so why the heck cant he feel something so basic as sorrow?

    Ch 79 You are Who You are
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  • MrTrixer
    MrTrixer9mth
    Commented

    Not a big fan of that confession to be honest, screaming out their feelings while keeping their eyes closed tighly like a couple of japanes teenagers from a romance manga? Did Nayta do the same thing 70 years ago when she met her first husband? Sure, those two can be considered young for their species, but why they would confess like this is just weird.

    Ch 78 I know Lust, But What is Love?
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  • MrTrixer
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    im not sure why they are depressed really, it was a hopeless situation, and even if they didnt kill them all, the duo managed to kill over 10k enemies in one attack. There really isnt a reason to be depressed really, realistically speaking, if their master wasnt a dungeon master and an unbeatable being near the dungeon core, they wouldve been all wiped out even if they had the most brilliant strategist leading them. The paladins had both equipment, manpower, preparations and enough support to level that dungeon to the ground if they didnt fool around that much..

    Ch 77 Hands Off, She's Mine
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  • MrTrixer
    MrTrixer9mth
    Commented

    Its a bit cruel to give them such a grand welcome, it will only raise the bar for the other kings when it is their turn to host a banquet. And both of the other two kingdoms are still trying to recover from their latest misfortunes. ^^"

    Ch 76 Three Kingdom Convention
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  • MrTrixer
    MrTrixer9mth
    Commented

    Dmn shame i didnt bet anything on that, pride and greed are as close as love and sorrow is after all. As for who Lillith is thinking about.. Probably Lucifer, cant really think of anyone high enough and with the same patience if we were to follow the biblical theme we got going here.

    Ch 75 A Threat Done Bad is a Challenge
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  • MrTrixer
    MrTrixer9mth
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    It was good that she arrived in the right spot at least, i was worried when she just teleported them away without even asking for directions. As for his choice of actions to lower the neighboring countries morale, was that such a good idea? That can be seen as a declaration of war, and any future diplomatic visits will most probably either be impossible or met with empty words. In the short term, his idea should work, in the long term, he just created an enemy and gave them motivtion to join hands with others to remove the threat that lives just outside of their border.

    Ch 74 Surprise! Explosion!
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  • MrTrixer
    MrTrixer9mth
    Replied to SeraphWedd

    I really like those details in a story, could you specify what chapter that was mentioned? Cause i cant recall seeing such instructions to be honest.

    Ch 54 I Became an Emperor?
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  • MrTrixer
    MrTrixer9mth
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    Only an hour to replenish that massive amount of mana? and his dungeon is now big enough to cover a country.. As long as he can cover the cost, wouldnt it be possible to claim the entire continent as his dungeon and become invincible in theory?

    Ch 68 Incoming Threat
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  • MrTrixer
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    The dungeon is offline due to being in debt, and its a magic circle, its like saying that a teenager cant hijack and use a car because it belongs to the company next door. xD

    Ch 71 Looking for DP Sources
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  • MrTrixer
    MrTrixer9mth
    Commented

    ..outside of the walls? So if the enemy attack again then they can just hijack the teleportation circles and invade Alfheim and Bestia if they ever come back? Great. As for the traps and other goodies he bought, they will most probably stop working as well once the dungeon goes into the negative again, so that was a bit of a waste. The only good thing were the mines, sure, he will have to pay even more upkeep, but at least now he will have a new source of income apart from all the corpses and gear from the invaders.

    Ch 71 Looking for DP Sources
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  • MrTrixer
    MrTrixer9mth
    Replied to MrTrixer

    (And dont get me started on that spell that allowed him to scan the lands in a 100.000 kilometer radius, sending all of that kind of information to his "human brain"...)

    Ch 70 Letting Go of the Sword to Embrace Magic
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  • MrTrixer
    MrTrixer9mth
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    Lets go back in time a bit. Their allies were attacked and Ein took off on a wolf that ran so fast that it could run above the tree crowns of the forest, forcing him to cling on for dear life while experiencing a few G-forces for a few hours, once he arrived, he went crazy with his manablade until he fainted, a few hours later the dungeon was in danger and woke him up, he shared some of his mana with the wolf then teleported back to the castle for a death match with the paladins. After having all of his mana explode and nearly ripping him apart he went around killing all the intruders until he finally got exhausted and left it to the wolves, he then went inside and heard of the situation in Bestia, teleported over inside a sanctuary that hurt him and his mana non-stop, using his mana again to cut off the leg of the dragon before dismembering him to the core and finally kill the dragon. Later on, after he dumped Michelle, filled with poison, festering wounds, out of mana and simply exhausted after the attack from a higher being from hell/chaos, he decided that all she needed was sleep and went to practice/ play with magic. And this guy walks around like there is nothing wrong with him, despite not even stopping to rest even once during these 48 hours or so where both his mana and mind were allowed to properly rest. I know that the dungeon made him semi-immortal butcome on, stop abusing your MC like this will ya? :P

    Ch 70 Letting Go of the Sword to Embrace Magic
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  • MrTrixer
    MrTrixer9mth
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    ..Are you kidding me? an army of sadistic, overpowered fanatics , at least 45.000 vs 800 elves and dwarves, and most of those were non-combatants of children, elders and women. And youre telling me that despite Ein barely have any mana from the dungeon, not only exhausted his mana reserves at the elves kingdom to the point where he fainted. And yet he was able to do all of this AND save the only one that nearly died? Author, why? Tell me why in detail why this makes any sense to you after this big event made them split and exhaust their resources and still come out on top..

    Ch 68 Incoming Threat
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  • MrTrixer
    MrTrixer9mth
    Commented

    to be honest, if no one died at all in this overexagarated battle, then the quality of the story would hit rock bottom in my eyes, you cant just play out such an hopeless situation and then have a happy ending where everyone survived despite the odds. As for that pope, nah, nevermind. But i really doubt that the orb can act as a livestream for other countries several thousands of kilometers away, at most, its a recorder at best..

    Ch 67 Who Told You I Won't Kill You?
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  • MrTrixer
    MrTrixer9mth
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    A bit too dramatic event there dont you think? I really hope that this aint a habit that will be common in this story, it has such potential after all..

    Ch 64 I'm Somewhat of a Swordswoman Myself
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