Every chapter kept me hooked. The story thus far has been pieced together nicely. I found very few mistakes in the grammar. Eloquently written, I look forward to this novel's continuation.

Holy mackeral the first chapter is awesome!!! I am digging this already!!!!

Love the storyline and characters! Can't wait to see character development. I've read to chapter 3 thus far and can't wait to catch up with the rest of the story!!