Dinessu

I love the main character easy going life. It something I wish I had right now. Even if he complains alot about being stressed out, I think waking up to a rich family is the best thing that can happen to him. But I think if you could make your writing more elaborate and clear it will be easier to read

Although there are some parts that are hard to understand because of the way you wrote it, the story is interesting

In this chapter it was hard to tell if you switched from first person point of view to a third person point of view. I think you should work on that

I found myself drawn to the characters, I see a woman who is going to be strong and I am already lovin' it. Your writing style 🤯. It made me jealous. While I continue to read this book I hope it becomes a manhwa some day

I love the story, I think I love Sam more. I would like to see the mate he would marry. What i don't like about the story is lillian ability not to fight back. Weak females are not my thing, I do hope to see her become a strong female lead. The story is well written, a bit rushed for my taste but still good

Your writing style makes it seem more like a screen play than an actual novel. If that is what you are going for

I think you really brought out Hwang character well, I found my self loving her and hoping that they would pick her and when I saw she got an offer from that company I was glad about it, I can see that you have published many books for that I was jealous because my book is the first book I am publishing on webnovel. it made me want to get to where you are now. anyways the storyline is[img=recommend]

I was so glad when the author changed it from first person point of view to a three person point of view, it really brought out the characters more. I love that there is a sort of mystery and suspense to it, makes you wonder why he is calling her my Nadia. I see emily and Nadia friendship as unhealthy and I think Emily is just advising her friend in the right way cuz you won't want your friend to enter a suspicious job just for money

I will be honest, your work is good but there are some part that needs a bit of work. I am saying this because as a writer I would also like if someone tell me where I need to improve on, me I am a writer who has grammar issues, if you take a look at it you would know that I have some issues I need to work on and I am doing that

This is the kind of novel you wich could also be made into a manhua, I really hope this story gets to that point. I think you are a good writer and I hope to see more chapters