No one thinks like this? I dont go why is my leg scrapped, im 29 year old male who did calculus but hates geometry and i never use a calculator, why is my leg hurt?

pretty sure the scroll came from detecting his void blood or something, so it makes sense to me, atleast as much as sense as the story can so far lol

Good job :)

Truck-samas' trusty sidekick Piano-san came in clutch

Glad to see you taking feedback to heart, author not worked, take your time, enjoy the process and im sure us readers will enjoy it aswell!

Ive caught up now, so far so good, few errors, somethings stick out like a sore thumb so far though, 1) mmo game with no mention from outside world of the game 2) mmo game where we have yet to see any other players 3) His logic for stats esp after leveling up seems silly, also little context is 1 hp a single tackle from death? or is 1 hp baseline of a normal persons sturdiness, explain the stat weight soon please. 4) Bullies beating people up with 0 interaction without adults is weird when their is no context for why, its also overused and uninteresting for the most part, helping the girl with her bullies is a nice touch thus far. But realistically who would go to school if the random kids have more authority than all the teachers, staff, etc. 5) Try to use the author note's instead of word count at end of chapters. Keep up the great work, its nice so far, glad to see a novel with so few grammar issues early in the writing, think about making a discord or something, some people might be able to help proof read or might find some fan artists Regards, Inari

She not he

No point in removing a from Rank, doesnt look good

Sense not sence again

this use of their possibly wrong, if your saying the rabbits are done with life its correct, if your saying they are done being skinned then use they're , also bought - bout error

sense - sence error

each other - eahother error

sge - she spelling error

farther, spelling error

the bear can see him in the cat tribe territory, seems like they should of been wiped out already lol

idk why everyone wants her to start being in control so fast, personally i want her to be unsure of herself, so she improves her current situation with josef, idk how it would be a butthurt survival if they go right into mind control with eye powers XD

Well the only context you gave was that the ancient goddess made the world, left it in the care of the agents, so thus there shouldnt be knowledge it doesnt know, now sure if other gods exist that are more powerful than her self to stop her own world from recognizing who they are then sure, put that sound more like lazy plot device, just my opinion, like they could have names and he has a more tangible goal to reach trying to figure out, or thru the teasers we got so far he see his old friends names and that would compel him even more probably to get answers. keep it up tho <3

the anticipation XD

Being excited doesnt always make someone irrational?

If this is an agent of the universe it makes 0 sense for it have unknown blessings