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Radiscar

Radiscar

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2018-12-27 JoinedCanada
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  • Radiscar
    Radiscar6mth
    Commented

    nice

    He spent more time with her than he had anticipated. By the time he had left her place, his hair and clothes were in a mess.
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    The Martial Unity
    Action · Lord_Streak
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  • Radiscar
    Radiscar6mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 1294 Escape
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    The Martial Unity
    Action · Lord_Streak
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  • Radiscar
    Radiscar3yr
    Replied to matamora

    Not to be crass but that definitely wasn't a distant approach...

    While he was getting dressed, Night Tide Sands was also getting dressed, and as she did, she said, "If I get pregnant later, I'll call you."
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    Mages Are Too OP
    Games · Soaring Flames
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  • Radiscar
    Radiscar3yr
    Commented

    love the story so far. I feel the descriptive words could be more..dynamic? the sentences seem a bit stilted to me. example: "he then turned" could be changed to simply "he turned" or throw in a description like "slowly, timidly, etc" instead

    Ch 74 Hesitation
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    Earth's Greatest Magus
    Fantasy · Avan
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