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I was so mesmerised on this wedding, so emotional and engrossed in what I was reading. .. Until "and she walks towards her"??? Huh?? Her??? Please be very careful on interchanging the "his", "her", "him", "he" and "she" in your chapters. It affects the storyline. But whatever, I do love your story. So great. Keep up the good work! Small errors can be corrected.
Jealous ... Jealous