Thanks a lot, I've been trying to find the perfect word to fix the sentence as I had to rewrite this sentence so many times since I couldn't fix it and couldn't get the sentence right no matter how many times I've rewritten it. I forgot you could just use "IT" and I just left it be when I uploaded the chapter.

Read it with all of the First letters only. I thought it would be obvious.

Reall?! Man, I thought you would have thought about Ballroom E Youkoso. As that was what I based the moment out of. With the ballroom dance and classical music and the massive amounts of spinning that were in the anime. Try it you might like it!

That's the whole point! It's meant to be Unrealistic, Weird, and Fantasy. Because that's what the story is about. A Chill Relaxing Story you could read when you have nothing to read or when you don't want to think too much over every little thing! You're not gonna enjoy the story if you're just going to logic every and any little thing or question if it's possible or not... The point is it's meant to be a happy little moment you don't need logic or question the possibility if that's what you're going to do then you're not gonna enjoy my story or anime or Movies or Manga because you keep putting logic or questioning something from something unrealistic or weird. You could say it's weird but that's it. It's weird you don't need to question the possibility or use logic just chill relax and have fun reading. Because I'm telling you right now it's not meant to be a Scientific or Logical story. If you're looking for that kind of Story then this is not the story for you. This story is for people to just listen to music while reading enjoying the little moments and imagining themselves doing it with them be it dancing with strangers or singing out loud in public.

So you listened to the Music? Nice! and My Bad!

Now if you complain about the woman cheating on the man who accepted the contract. There's a reason why I made and give The Soul Contract an Invoke/Chant to activate it. So people wouldn't and couldn't just say "I Love You!" and the woman said "I Love You Too!" then bam both of you are in a soul contract. That's stupid. If you are ready and sure that this woman is the one for you, Your True Love. Then say or activate, Invoke, Chant The Soul Contract if she said: No. Then hope you get better and find someone who will accept your love and if she said yes and wanted to do it. Then you have found your true love because it means she loves you as much as you love her. because she accepted what those words and the contract truly mean.

Another thing! When did I ever say the woman should be a virgin? I wrote you have to give her your virginity if she has accepted! I didn't say or write take her virginity! Also, The reason why there are more good effects rather than bad effects because it has so many restrictions. And what I meant by you giving your virginity to her doesn't mean immediately have XXX. It just means you have to give her your virginity once she has accepted and wants to finally do it.

huh? My bad! But when did I ever say it was our reality? Sure it would be hard to find a virgin girl here in our reality but when did I ever say it was our reality? I mean sure it had the same apps but I never said it was in the same world!

Huh? Do you mean the story? If so then it's called: The God Of Highschool DxD By DamonGrund from Wattpad.

If you're getting annoyed by that then I'm sorry this isn't for you... This is meant for you to chill and just listen to the music while reading the story, to have a better experience and to chill more when you have nothing to do or to read and if you're getting annoyed by having the whole lyrics then this story just isn't for you...

Can't really do that as I don't want to do it, As I myself love singing with the song so the only thing I could do for you adds A {Skip To Here If You Don't Want To Sing or Listen To The Music!}

Well, they have their vacation and each one of the homies changed school so if they meet up it would have to be them both going to the same school... But that doesn't always! like in reality sometimes your friend or homie would transfer to a different school instead of going to your school or staying in the same school. So the Reunion is well that! A One-Last Reunion before each of them separates and goes on with their own life. Of course, I already have a plan just wait!

No, it's different! You'll understand the more you read!

My bad bro. Became a habit!

Not teeth! Blood from his bleeding gums was dropping into his teeth forming well a bloody mouth and something that looks like bleeding teeth.

Thanks <3

Another thing is you would have already noticed there not a normal family or people as I literally wrote while Checking the gift for something her red eyes turned blue. No offense and I don't hate this type of comment but the only thing I could defend for this type of comment is to just chill and read it slow as you might miss something important either a hint or something. Again I don't mean any hate or anything just telling you to read a little slower and try to understand what those words mean or the intent of the sentence.

Not really? Well, It depends if you're talking about the suspicion, then you will understand later. But if you're talking about the hidden thing about him then what the girl was interested in is about what happened in the first chapter. She's interested in what was hidden inside of him since you know what he picked in the First Chapter then you know what's hidden inside of him. A Demon. Hope you understood now! anyways thanks for the comment.

As The Author of this book! Gotta rate it 5 to at least look good. Now on to the problems. The Writing Quality: Would be more on your preference on what type of story or your preference in the type of POV. So nothing I could do but say if you are going to read this. Then read it when you have nothing to read and just bored out of your mind. Like what I wrote is supposed to be a chill story. The Stability of Updates: Not much to say but I'll try to update as much as I could and write as much as I could. But I could only post it when I'm ready as I need some breaks too. Story Development: Fluffy Romance, Lots of Fluffy Romance. With A lot of Action and Adventure once our Arc or Story hits those parts. Character Design: Can't really say anything to this as I just thought of this and thought it was a cool design for an MC and Female Lead. World Background: A world where there is another hidden side full of demons, angels, monsters, yokai's, dragons, etc. But also connected to the normal world. But only those who either are special or the same as those monsters angels, demons, etc are allowed to go to the Otherside.

After reading the Prologue all I could say is that. God, You are amazing at writing. While it's not perfect there are indeed grammatical errors it's not that noticeable and could easily be fixed another one could be that try to change your paragraphs into shorter ones. For a paragraph make it like a maximum of four lines and try to balance it into 2 to 3 lines per paragraph to make it easier to read and less compact that you might miss some important words or moments as it was too compact. Other than that it was an Interesting concept for the start and something I could relate to it. (Even Though I'm a Boy/Man I know that feeling especially if you have brothers.) The story's concept at the start is very interesting and good I'm not sure about the next couple of chapters as I haven't read it yet. (Another Notice is that don't rush your stories... Nothing is wrong with taking a bit of break to fix and add more spice to your story and don't be to pressure I'm sure you'll get better at it and the views would go up. Taking time to write and let yourself rest is not a bad thing and nothing wrong with taking a bit of a break if you can't get the inspiration. Granted this is for people like me or You might already have everything planned and could easily continue writing for a long time.) Still, this is just my feedback hope you have fun writing!!!