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if you have any respect for Arthur, you better save Bradley from tb.You hold the fate of the 'Poor Man's Arthur Morgan' in your hands.
The author stole this plot from RDR2.HEAR ME AUTHOR, you can make the plot the same but you can never make me show any empathy for Bradley.For he is no Arthur Morgan, Arthur was the one and only.
OOOO I think he knows his mother, more than on first-name basis.
Difference is that Jujtsu kaisen's blood manipulation still has some ounce of science. Our Author has entered and thrown science out the window as soon as the novel started. 3rd rated novel. Read Release that Witch much better then this bad novel.
And Blood manipulation is stupid power. You should have given him a Water based power. with water he can still control blood as blood consist of 90% water. Author is not well versed in basic science. That is why you are writing books. I normally dont care but you just went into technical details.
Increasing or decreasing blood flow can not change emotions. Brain has complete copyright over emotions. If you wanted to change peoples emotion you should have given MC the power to manipulate electricity. With this power you can control a human like a robot. send false signals to nerves, and you can take over peoples bodies and have them dance your songs, or fry their brains like a friend circuit board like tesla is doing with their neural network project. Brain sends electric signals to the entire body so controlling those signals give you complete control over the body. Some people were talking about dopamine and things, releasing these also comes under Brain. With blood Manipulation you can increase or decrease blood pressure which can weaken peoples bodies and put them in a comatose state or just stop the blood flow and kill them or increase the blood flow which will make them super fast mc can use this on himself to temporarily increase his body strength, reflexes and speed.
deluge means "A sever flood" or "Overwhelming flood". Google FTW.
author, you are showing mc as a brilliant guy who thinks and learns and uses everything efficiently. why would a barons child marry a commoner where he can marry into a big family and acquire much wealth and obviously more beautiful life there. he can find love in higher families as well. dont be 3rd rate. i hope ur logic isnt just garbage like other authors.
wouldnt you throw a party if your son won 100 million dollars on lottery
aba jaa na be bhen ke lode, jaa jake gaand marwa, sale randi ki aulaad. tera baap bhadwa, teri maa randi, teri behen bhi randi. aur tu chutiya.
behen ke lode, madarchod, randi ki aulad, chuth ke pakode, maa chuda chal nikal
tum chutiya saale, tera baap chutiya Teri maa chutiya bhen ke lode.
I am compelled to write this review because most of the reviews given for this novel are MISLEADING, MISINFORMING, and straight up LIE. The novel has no class, bad story development, bad character development, bad world development. I mean if you want to read, then sure but after 20-50 chapters you will come on your own and READ my review AGAIN. Lets talk about: 1)Writing Quality:- Quality of writing is not bad, apart from some grammatical mistakes, I don't see anything that can be considered 'mood-destroying'. 2)Story Development:- I know this is a cultivation/fantasy novel where MC is born OP. From the 1st chapter author starts describing characters that are heaven defying and renown across entire regions, but by the end of 10th chapter, all of those characters are shivering, wetting themselves and shivering when anything happens. The author doesnt have a proper scale for distinguishing between different levels of power, renown, strength etc. I know that author needs stronger villain to keep the story going but the novel feels like a summary version of a really bad cultivation novel. 3) Nomenclature:- The author is using some kind random name generator for naming everything. If he is naming sect, then he will generate 4 names, add all of them together and add sect at the end, eg: 'Saint Tiger Demon Beast Clan', this is a sect/clan in the novel. And this random name generator is used for naming of cities, regions, weapon class, cultivation class, and everything that exists in the novel apart from Names of humans. 3)Character design/development: Just sad. There is no development for other characters. If you are not a family of MC, you will not progress at all. Only MC & his family are allowed to progress. And I don't want to reveal anything but the MC has not aged one bit from 1st chapter till 150th chapter and he has gone from medium-strong in his own sect to strongest in entire continent. IN 1 YEAR. Author doesnt have any grasp of the TIME. 4) World design: Usually any good novel writer will work on the concept, character and the novel setting and much more before starting to write the novel, but our AUTHOR is winging it, I will give you an example: 1st to 10th chapter: MC stronger then 90% of his sect. now author needs a villain, bring top dog of his sect and make them fight. after winning MC stronger then everyone. so now author is in need of another stronger villain, lets make a new sect/empire, make an arrogant character of that empire who is more powerful then MC and have them bully the sect or target MC so MC will go and fight and while fighting will become as powerful as the character and win. Now author needs another sect/empire, AND SO THE CYCLE CONTINUES. The novel is written by a CHILD of age no more then 15. Or by a guy who couldn't mature past his adolescence. And it angers me that so many bots were used to give higher rating.
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