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BananaChicken

BananaChicken

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I'm tired of the system genre so I decided making my own stories

2018-12-25 JoinedPhilippines
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Writing

6.2h

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  • BananaChicken
    BananaChicken2yr
    Replied to Melody_oo

    The novel I submitted is already on review._.

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    Weapon System
    War ¡ BananaChicken
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  • BananaChicken
    BananaChicken2yr
    Replied to Melody_oo

    dude._. I already discussed with you

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    Weapon System
    War ¡ BananaChicken
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  • BananaChicken
    BananaChicken2yr
    Posted

    I'm still on the first five chapters and I can tell that this is a good book. It started off pretty fast and we experienced things the same way the main character does which is a really good thing as it makes an effect on its readers.

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    Starts as a Vampiress, Ends into a Villainess
    Fantasy ¡ authortinnnnn
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  • BananaChicken
    BananaChicken2yr
    Posted

    This story is very interesting although I must admit that I want confused for a bit but it wasn't that much of a problem as I still enjoyed the story.

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    I guess i do love you!!!
    Teen ¡ jazzclover
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  • BananaChicken
    BananaChicken2yr
    Replied to Akira_Monadelle

    thanks for the review!

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    Getting Better With My Other Self
    Action ¡ BananaChicken
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  • BananaChicken
    BananaChicken2yr
    Replied to Akira_Monadelle

    Basically the ice froze everything except his head😅. Sorry I'm pretty bad atdescribing stuff

    "I'm so sorry for charging like that, I would no longer interfere with your doings just please get me out of this thick ice, My name's Vorden!" the bald guy pleaded
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    Getting Better With My Other Self
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  • BananaChicken
    BananaChicken2yr
    Posted

    The story was well written. The first paragraphs are quite confusing due to the dialogues being so close to each other. The next paragraphs all completely well and I suggest that you should the describe the world background more.

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    The Tale of Weiz Ludenberg
    Fantasy ¡ Kisirin
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  • BananaChicken
    BananaChicken2yr
    Posted

    The flow of the story every chapter is amazing and I may have left one star missing because I find the dates a little bit confusing but overall the story is great and I also find the idea as a unique one.

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    Outlandish impulse
    Sci-fi ¡ Tailrs ink
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  • BananaChicken
    BananaChicken2yr
    Commented

    I seriously find this kind of scenarios satisfying.

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    Outlandish impulse
    Sci-fi ¡ Tailrs ink
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  • BananaChicken
    BananaChicken3yr
    Replied to amyalison27

    can i ask for more details?

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    Weapon System
    War ¡ BananaChicken
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