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that's... actually kind of impressive

hey boss man, loving thus story so far, can't wait for the next chapter. obito is my favourite character from the series, of all time, so I'm very happy with this :)

loving this as always ! can't wait for the next chapter <3

I really like how you're going for the Billy redemption, I love it, just binged the whole book, can't wait for moreeee

whoever touched E is going to become nothing but a distant stain on the sidewalk. thanks for the chap, boss <3 amazing as always :)

haikyuu system with memories

hey, just letting you know, a masochist only enjoys the pain on themselves, sadists are the ones who inflict pain :)

that was excellent, extremely good segway into the rest of the novel! it adds mystery to it, making people want to keep reading the novel, and find out who this man is, extremely well written, well-done :)

i completely agree! it's a good prologue! it just needs a bit of intrigue to being in the readers, and also keep them there. by all means, keep it the same, it works regardless, and won't take away from the story in the slightest :)

i completely agree! it's a good prologue! it just needs a bit of intrigue to being in the readers, and also keep them there

I gave it a read. for something that is before the story, I believe it gives too much away, maybe hide kirin's name, to add some mystery to the prologue and let the readers piece it together, maybe get the demon king to call him some sort of title, something like half-breed, or maestro or something like that, other than that, it was written very well :D

okay on a serious note, this is probably the best novel I've read on this website, periodt. even better than most physical books. keep up the good work!

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i just used a fast pass for this ;-; woo** oh well

TANGO! NOOOOOO

yo, imagine if Tango could wield the giant's great sword, might have to use and enlarge spell on Tango, and a reduce spell on the sword, and even then, use all 4 hands, but it's possible

yo my character gets to lead the army of the ghost king? YESSSSS!

eyyyy here I ammmm

yeah, I realized when I read ahead haha 😅