still reading👍

has unbelievably great character development.that will leave you on the edge of your seat wandering what's coming next. 100% recommended ....

Thanks for the chapter.👍

it's fine to take a break from writing and focus on real life things because you can always come back and continue writing. while your personal life can't wait . so do what you want.

this is a great story that keeps you wanting to read more(at least for me) it's a little fast or slow at times but I think it needs that at those times. MC ain't over powered were most other novels does that. I personally I prefer the MC to learn from his mistakes. and not be a goody too shoes because that does get boring fast. In the end I think this is a good novel over all

this novel has a neat concept, and quite interesting to read, keep it up.👍

thanks for chapter.

this a great story of someone not to overpowered,but someone that grows over time, to me that's what makes a story great keeping the reader interested in what comes next, It's a bit goofy with the weapon, but it's something new, at least I never seen someone write about. SO I RECOMMEND. also decently sized chapters.

thank you for the chapter 👍

thanks for the chapter 👍

thank you for the chapter the story telling and development is awesome.

this,is good ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................ .. .. .............. . ......... ......what you expect Beans?

can't believe this is a thing and it's great.

thanks for the chapter

no problem

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thank you for the chapter, It's a great read. keep up the awesome work

thank you for the chapter

thanks for the chapter and keep up the amazing work