Festering_Shark

I thought dry skin doubled the 4× weakness to an 8× weakness, not added a doubled base +1× to 5×

this chapter is bad: repetitive and nonlinear, needs fixing

He's almost creating a wormhole railgun, wow

and only 1 side, like a mobius strip

An upgrade to the mobile strip closes loop would be a Klein bottle, it has only one finite plane yet no edges

from what I saw, the author most likely used AI for assistance on fight scenes, socializing and character growth felt good,. no glaring plot holes or AI written nonsense, mainly just tapping wand on the ground to transfigure the earth in battle despite probably standing up

volde has graduated, meaning that hagrid had already been expelled but kept on as gamekeeper

Good worldbuilding, I enjoyed it

I misremembered, historically a score was 20 years. "4 score and 7 years ago" America was founded, and it had happened 87 years prior

Note: historically in the Gettysburg address, a score is 7 years If we think advanced age refers to the 28 years past his prime of 50, then 3 score + 10 years means a score is 6 years If we think advanced age refers to his current age of 78, then 3 score + 10 calculates to a score = 22.67, which is a lot less clean