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StarsGod

StarsGod

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Criador de mundos e realidades...Pequeno escritor,grande sonhador.

2018-12-24 JoinedBrazil
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  • StarsGod
    StarsGod2yr
    Commented

    Dropado! Honestly your writing is good, but this gratuitous hate for dumbledore is exhausting, the main character doesn't help, he also has adult behavior, but children's actions. I think the author lacks empathy, trying to understand the other side is very important both to take the plot in a pleasant direction and not to make the main character unpleasant and irrational.

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  • StarsGod
    StarsGod2yr
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    crap

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  • StarsGod
    StarsGod2yr
    Commented

    flirting with a child congratulations

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  • StarsGod
    StarsGod2yr
    Commented

    Rude to Hermione and Hagrid, you still have adult memories try to act a bit like one

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  • StarsGod
    StarsGod2yr
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    Is Dumbledore the villain in this story? He didn't win anything and didn't even try to win anything, in the end why would he be a villain too? Even if some of his actions were wrong or questionable he always thought of the best for Harry and the world, what if I remember well it was Dumbledore who protected Harry's house.

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  • StarsGod
    StarsGod2yr
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    Have you lived all your time in the modern era of the Muggle world, but you don't have any pressure to kill a person? I hate it when they do that to characters

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  • StarsGod
    StarsGod2yr
    Posted

    Does Meng Chang improve? Seriously, I'm in chapter 1100 and he's the most hateful character, he's the same as mc, hateful and selfish as much as possible, but at least mc is funny, Meng Chang is so annoying and annoying, he never changes or looks at the point of view from no one and for no reason he totally ignores how scary the little mc actions seem that always end up with his plan like it's nothing. he is so obsessed with the easy life, and even though he has nothing to be proud of he will still buy himself from the mc as if he were going to beat him in one shot ignoring the myth of invincibility at all, the amazing company created from nothing, yeah too ignorant and arrogant to the point of ridicule or simply an unnecessary character to disgust the reader.

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