Hey brother,If want to improve I have a recommendation,go to fanfic.com and find the dark wolf shiro's fanfics.That will help you a lot. As always wish you the best and I am really sorry about giving you low rating but I have no other choice,your writing is declining and becoming more like a cheap copy of 3rd rate cringy Chinese wuxia fanfic.

I am sorry akikan40,I know I am sounding like broken record but your story now just like a 3rd rate Chinese xianxia fanfic.

I am sorry Akikano4 even though I love your writings but your work started to become like those third grade Chinese novels.It is truly sad my brother.

Hey buddy,normally I love your writings but what's wrong with this one?It is sounding like one of those racist Chinese novels.Please take care of that.Aside from that everything is awesome as always.😊

Hey bro,I love your novels but can you please not make mc's character like a hypocritical Chinese main character.

One of the most pathetic third grade novels I have ever read.

Hey,if you are gonna post once a week. Can you make the chapter bigger?😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😊😁😁😁😁😁😁😊😊😊😊😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

Awesome

You and your mc are just simps

Please don't stop this novel.This is awesome.🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

Hey can u add android 18 to mc's harem

Good,do not stop.😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😋😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

I don't understand why people even write these types of novels,where mc is just main characters butches.Pathetic and quite frankly I find it repulsive and vile.🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️

Hey,you post once a week.At least try to make it bigger.

Go to Harry Potter world and steal all the girls.Even though it is cliche go to dxd,Roserio+Vampire,Tengo tenjhe etc.😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜

Yes as my bro of culture said author-sama.

Kaguya,tsunade,kushina,

Hey,pls don't make mc Ichigo's sidebitch.We have enough of mcs who will aid canon characters for shit