sailesh0

Hey brother,If want to improve I have a recommendation,go to fanfic.com and find the dark wolf shiro's fanfics.That will help you a lot. As always wish you the best and I am really sorry about giving you low rating but I have no other choice,your writing is declining and becoming more like a cheap copy of 3rd rate cringy Chinese wuxia fanfic.

I am sorry akikan40,I know I am sounding like broken record but your story now just like a 3rd rate Chinese xianxia fanfic.

I am sorry Akikano4 even though I love your writings but your work started to become like those third grade Chinese novels.It is truly sad my brother.

Hey buddy,normally I love your writings but what's wrong with this one?It is sounding like one of those racist Chinese novels.Please take care of that.Aside from that everything is awesome as always.😊

Hey bro,I love your novels but can you please not make mc's character like a hypocritical Chinese main character.

One of the most pathetic third grade novels I have ever read.

Hey,if you are gonna post once a week. Can you make the chapter bigger?😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😊😁😁😁😁😁😁😊😊😊😊😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

Awesome

You and your mc are just simps

Please don't stop this novel.This is awesome.🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰