thank you. this is my first work and I don't know if it's good enough yet but I will reconsider your suggestion.

It's a nice story but hard to tell if the character is male or female if the proper PRO-NOUN is not used for a character. for example, if it's a girl use her, she or herself if it's a boy use he, him, his or himself I hope the writer can work on this small thing

I just can't get enough of this lady. am in love❤️

jealous will kill someone 😂