The case with Haruhime, i cant see how this two can hook up.. the way i see it haruhime already see him as someone to look up to. Like an older sibling. I just cant see how she start a relationship with the mc, romantically at least.

Also your grammar is not that bad. It needs improving but readable..

I for one is interested in your choice in leaving out rias. Dont get me wrong. I like lemons, but i also like the journey to get to the lemons. You having a different take on your story is refreshing for me, at least for now anyway. Im not saying in not having rias in the harem (if you plan of making one) but having the journey to be slow is much more interesting and fulfilling in my opinion. Although i am very interested in what your planning for rias. As for the pat eon. Im broke haha. Just dont go collecting to much waifu like some pokemon and im fine with whatever your doing. I have short attention span and memories you see. I have no problem for the chapter update.. just take your time .

Very good fanfic... The characters are realistic and true to their personality from the og work. Mc power is well paced and balanced also a bit op in some aspect but not too much. His personality is somewhat believable. I love the fiance subplot and hope it will turn out well. Also cat 🐈😺

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As bludvein said, i dont think ulfric would want to ally himself with the vampires for the life of him. hes a racist fool who sees violent is the only way to free skyrim but thats all the more reason for him not to side with them. he started the rebellion to "save" skyrim and her people after all. that is unless he's under some powerful illusion magic magic that even his court mage can't detect. it would be fun if he hid. what will rictus do? will he kill ulfric or try to save and capture him. Is ulfric under the vampire seduction spell? i suspect the skilled in illusion is a vampire who started in morthal making his illusion skill much stronger. plus a fight between illusion and alteration would be hype to see. one controls the mind, and the other controls reality also, im sad that this gem of a fanfic is ending soon but i'm also glad that i found this a week ago! i also wanted to ask whatever happend to erik the slayer? did he joined the restored? if so did rictus gain the bonus abilities having another skilled under him. In truth i personally would love if this novel would continue in 2-3 chapter more but mr author, you do you it is your story after all and i thank you for making it be a part of my life. i just hope you make the end as open for a sequel as possible. we never know when you'll have a sudden inspiration. Once again mr author, thank you!