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I really enjoyed how stable the MC’s character is throughout the novel. The world also feels genuinely alive, with characters who have their own thoughts, motivations, and goals instead of everything revolving around the MC. That makes the setting feel much more natural and believable. There are definitely some slower or weaker scenes, but if you push through a few chapters, the story usually picks up again and puts you in a much better situation. Another thing I really like is the MC’s progression. He doesn’t suddenly become an all-knowing, overwhelmingly powerful being out of nowhere. His abilities and knowledge build up gradually, and the benefits increase naturally as his power grows. The progression feels earned rather than forced. Overall, the novel has a good balance of character development, world-building, progression, and independent characters, which makes it an enjoyable read.

I'm not sure if it's true or not but too many new things are happening in a pace where atleast I'm feeling its not sinking or setting properly, you introduced, dwarves, powerful Monsters, Hollow Forest, Other part of the mountain, The wall, Wild Roots with different variety, Orcs with Tribes and the Space stone mine. The topics which I remember now with Garan also being complicated. The things are happening way too fast, let them develop Nispendana, either you are rushing too much or you are loosing some grasp on things happening.

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