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I dont see a budding romance, it’s more of a parental relationship! The only romance so far is with nyx
I feel this story would have made sense if he wasn’t reincarnated. He acts like a inexperienced kid! Not a former skilled assassin. He loses focus constantly, lost in his thoughts and ignores his surroundings.he talks WAY too much, he too trusting, and naive. If he was just a abandoned kid, his action would fit the narrative better
I was thinking that!!!! This guys mouth is open non stop! He gives away information, just because he’s asked! No wonder he was killed in his past life! A chatty assassin can’t be trusted ! He reminds me of Naruto, the loudest ninja in history. Instead of being a introvert I bet he’ll seek friends and gain the power of friendshiphip!
Her being stundere isn’t really the issue. I mean I understand she’s working with a full mental deck. Imagine being forced to marry a invading race, and your future depends on him loving you. Plus she’s young. Doubt it’ll be love at first sight! My problem is the MC, ( yes I know, something happened to him and he’ll undergo development later) but right now he’s a cringe lord. She threatened him, starved him, shown him nothing but contempt, and he as happy as can be, calling her wifey. She ’s all but admitted the marriage is deception to avert a death flag! But all he can think of is ” I’ m married to a cute girl!”
I see the author is going in the make everyone utterly unlikeable, for the sake of future developmenture route! Cause not a single character is worth saving, a brain dead MC, a abusive female lead, and a deceptive emperor. Not to mention the disgusting servants that can abuse him, While he can’t fight back.
Maybe I’m misunderstanding something, isn’t she the one that pulled him into the back, yelled at him and denied him the promotion. How did she turn into this person who cares and has his best interest at heart. Did I miss something or is that another person? Im lost!!!!
I’m Loving this story, it’s potential to be a epic story is high. If I were to have a single complaint, it would be the MC. he has absolutely no presence so far, it’s so low that if you literally took him off the page, the story wouldn’t change much. I know there’s a lot of character growth to be had and that he’s just coming into his own, and I can’t wait to see how he grows. Just giving my opinion of him up to this chapter.
There is just so much I’m scratching my head at? He wants to lose his virginity, But runs away from women that wants him! He knows they care about looks, but stays average looking, even though he said one can change their appearance! He’s one of the youngest lords, but isn’t considered a genius!
Am I the only one that thinks that coffin is horsesh*t? You have to fight to obtain beast cores to make a creature that potentially better than you, then it can evolve, only for you to free it, only for its loyalty to not be assured! What if it turns hostile? Wouldn’ that mean you struggled to make a ”OP” enem?y