FaebyenTheFairy

Glad you like it! I'm uploading these as we write them, and do you mean that you want to see Monster Tamers fight alongside their monster? The MC won't be able to for a little while, but I'll see what I can do.

Ummm, what? Elaborate, please.

Many thanks for the review! And I am aware of all those criticisms xD It is, after all, supposed to be a "simple vrmmo story" that I and Raidishier can write chapters of in a day. Raidishier is brand-new to writing fiction so this is just a creative writing exercise for him. Stuff like complex characterization and long and detailed combat is far beyond him. If you want better characterization and combat, check out my other creative writing project "Dark Seas Leading Demise"! The first book is complete at 136,000 words long, the MC is by themselves for most the story, the combat is more detailed, and there are lots of little clues and hints as to the true nature of the world.

Lol I never thought about that, but I'm now putting it into the book! xD One of his future enemies or something is gonna mock him with the name "Radish". Also, thanks for being the first to comment!